Nowadays, the world is developed, intricate, and competitive, so human activity leads the earth to worse situations. There are several reasons why I feel like this, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, there is serious competition between different countries to construct more and more industry productions, in this way they do all their potentials to using earth resource. Unfortunately, prosperous developed countries try to use more and more while undeveloped countries try to increase their industrial productivity; as a result, the governments and industries have enjoyed the economic benefits, while their undesirable results return to earth. For instance, in recent years, fracking is a drilling technology that has undeniably affected the environment, like air and water contamination.
Secondly, serious health problems are consequences of industrial activities. Based on this, contamination of air and water is higher than ever before. Millions of people worldwide are engaged with cancer and handicaps that are the direct results of industrial activity around the cities. For instance, near my city, cancer is far more than normal rates, which recent studies indicate is the result of an oil refinery near the city.
The last point but not least, is that deforestation happens on an extensive scale for gaining benefits like constructions or worthwhile woods, while trees are a crucial part of our earth and tree destruction reduces animals in their historical realm and danger the animals to extinction, so the animals' extinctions will be destroying vital cycle as the result of that all life will expose to danger. For example, if bees eliminate, life will be destroyed soon.
Considering all the points I mentioned, I strongly believe that human activities lead the earth to destruction. Due to industrial activity, pollution, and deforestation, natural resources are exposed to vast extinction. As a result, all governments and the people in charge worldwide should have a comprehensive schedule to save the earth as soon as possible.
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, i feel, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1763.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 322.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4751552795 4.8611393121 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09914393115 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590062111801 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 87.1499997073 48.9658058833 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.928571429 100.406767564 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104376393683 0.236089414692 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0388935288227 0.076458572812 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457494089791 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0668745017135 0.150856017488 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0513757183272 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 11.7677419355 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 58.1214874552 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.8 10.9000537634 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.01818996416 123% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...I will explore in the following essay. First of all, there is serious competit...
^^^
Line 3, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n the following essay. First of all, there is serious competition between dif...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, i feel, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1763.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 322.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4751552795 4.8611393121 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09914393115 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590062111801 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 87.1499997073 48.9658058833 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.928571429 100.406767564 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104376393683 0.236089414692 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0388935288227 0.076458572812 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457494089791 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0668745017135 0.150856017488 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0513757183272 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 11.7677419355 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 58.1214874552 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.8 10.9000537634 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.01818996416 123% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.