For hundreds of years, people have not stopped debating this fascinating question. Choosing a job is a crucial and critical task of our life since this decision-making has a profound impact on our future. Hence, regarding this issue, some people believe that getting a secure job is really better than waiting for a more satisfying one. As far as I am concerned, I suppose that the advantages of a job which we are satisfied with outweigh the disadvantages. This essay will demonstrate some points of my view in the following paragraphs.
Above all, although taking a secure job may come across as a suitable thing for us at the beginning, we will be sickened to death to do it for a long time. As we know, all works and no play make Jack a dull boy. Therefore, it will be really detrimental to continue a job that does not satisfy us. For instance, my cousin had an opportunity to work in a bank ten years ago. However, it was not very satisfying for him, he took it right away. Nowadays he is really tired of that and he wants to find a new job, but he gets old and finding a new job is too hard for an old man.
The second reason which deserve some words here is that we spend much time on a job which we are satisfied with. This amount of time can lead to more creativity and it can result in a better product. This chain will keep going until it makes us an affluent person. My friend Ali is a compelling example of that. He works with his computer all the time and writes a number of programs in different field. His programs become the most famous one in our country. Hence, he is really wealthy and famous here and everyone is familiar with his works.
The last reason why I feel that way is that as an old proverb says: "being satisfied with a job is a goal of that." To be more exact, a job can be considered as a good one, if it satisfies the person who is doing it. In contrast, if it does not satisfy the person it can have bad impact on others parts of the life of that person. Take teaching, for example, if a teacher does not like to communicate with children who are in the early stages of their life, it will be really hard for him/her to do that and it can make him crazy about all children in other places.
To sum it up, given the fact that a satisfying job can lead to wealth and fame. In contrast, a job that does not satisfy the worker can make him really tired and can have a bad effect on his/her life. As a result, I think waiting for a more satisfying job is really better than taking a secure job as soon as possible.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, may, really, regarding, second, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i feel, i suppose, i think, in contrast, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 67.0 43.0788530466 156% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2070.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 491.0 407.700716846 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.21588594705 4.8611393121 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70728369723 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43967541435 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.470468431772 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 657.9 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5598293418 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.25 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4583333333 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.29166666667 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289112017177 0.236089414692 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0841596928608 0.076458572812 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729195608952 0.0737576698707 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175814086269 0.150856017488 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510661870762 0.0645574589148 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 11.7677419355 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 58.1214874552 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.2 10.9000537634 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.98 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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