Education is treated as one of the vital factors for the long term development of society as well as a nation. Since the dawn of civilization, people have given tremendous value to education as it provides a platform for students to enlighten themselves with knowledge. University, the most prestigious institution in the education system, plays a significant role to improve the education system and the cultivation of skillful peers for the welfare of society. Personally, I believe that university professors should deserve a high salary. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, money is really a strong motivation to keep professors concentrated on their tasks like teaching and researching. In this modern and materialistic world, everyone has to struggle to live their life smoothly and perfectly, either it could be a teacher, engineer, doctor and so on. Compared to the past, nowadays professors have paid a scant amount of salary in comparison to their effort. As a result, some of them started to concentrate on other business like software firm, a manufacturing company to earn more money. However, when they are paid well enough they solely use their mind to teaching and research related activities. For example, my university spends a very small amount of their expenditure regarding the payment of teachers and therefore, many professors started to run business to make more money. I have taken a course, titled Algorithm analysis and design, this course was conducted by a professor who was always busy with his software firm. We barely found him on the campus. He usually visited university twice in a week to conduct our class and thereafter went away. As a result, in some cases, we needed to study on our own as he didn't enough time to offering advising as well as tutoring.
Moreover, offering handsome salary attracts other prominent professors to join that university. We know in the job market the best company can recruit the most prominent employees is the one who offers the highest paycheck. Similarly, if a university wants to motivate renowned employees, they have to provide free accommodation, free transport facilities, flexible working hours and of course the most attractive and visible one-high salaries. When a lot of eminent teachers join the university, it will definitely be a beneficial situation considering student admission, high-quality education. For instance, it is said that Purdue University offers its Ph.D. graduates up to a 35k dollar and it is the reason why many graduates would like to choose Purdue to pursue a further degree and even become a professor in the future. All these can lay a strong foundation for the development of Purdue, making it one of the perfect as well as a model university in all fields.
To recapitulate, I strongly believe that it is urgent for a university to pay its faculties a perfect amount. This is because it encourages them to carry on their primary purposes on university without interruption.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, really, regarding, similarly, so, therefore, well, as to, for example, for instance, i feel, of course, as a result, as well as, in some cases, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2550.0 1977.66487455 129% => OK
No of words: 500.0 407.700716846 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72870804502 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97503210067 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 276.0 212.727598566 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 825.3 618.680645161 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.48665647 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.869565217 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7391304348 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.82608695652 5.45110844103 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140737060875 0.236089414692 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0375818300083 0.076458572812 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0299881245155 0.0737576698707 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0826796066924 0.150856017488 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00832291592978 0.0645574589148 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 11.7677419355 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 58.1214874552 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 132.0 86.8835125448 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 88.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.5 Out of 30
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