In this contemporary world, virtually all the work has been replaced by technology due to its development at fast pace and the works can be done faster and more productivity than in the past. Although, some may consider interesting and enjoyable when they work for only for three days with longer hours in a day. I personally support the idea of working five days a week with shorter hours and this essay will explain why.
First, job can be done efficiently without having any stress. While when employee's work for five days a week with shorter hours, they will be able to do things smoothly and steadily as they do not have to presssurize themselve working for long hours to complete the task. If the employee's work for three days with longer hour, they will feel bored and rush to complete their task without having proper analysis. In addition, instead of keeping flow of their work, they will become lazy when they come to work after having almost four day holiday. For instance, in my college days, our class schedule has been made to have three class in a week and all of the student's and teacher's were happy about it. In contrast, when we come to class we tend to feel like we have return to college after six month and in fact, professor's were also lost their stability to keep on going with there lecture. Consequently, it has lead to depletion in student's performance as well as teacher's which has lost their track and we have become lazy.
Second, working for five days with shorter hours will not only help employee's to do their work efficiently but also it will help employee's to spend their time nicely with their families. When employee's work for five days with shorter hours they will get plenty of time to spend with their family members and also they will get lots of rest. It will eventually lead to keep them refresh when they go to work place. In case, if they happen to work for less days with longer hours in a day, employee's will feel dauanting when it come accomplishment of their goal. In addition to previous example, when we have our regular class with shorter period, lescture and students used to be up to date with their work as everyone in the class tend to be active in the class and professor were fostered to work hard. After class, teachers and student felt more excited to spend their time with near and dear one's with positive vibes. As a result, they were able to plan accordingly and make used of leisure time efficiently.
In conclusion, i support the idea of working five days with shorter hour's because it will lead todo their work effectively without any strees and moreover, they will be able to spend their leisure time nicely with their near and dear one's without any wastage.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 649, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
... made to have three class in a week and all of the students and teachers were happy about ...
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Line 3, column 795, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'month' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'months'.
Suggestion: months
...ike we have return to college after six month and in fact, professors were also lost ...
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Line 3, column 864, Rule ID: ON_GOING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'ongoing'?
Suggestion: ongoing
... were also lost their stability to keep on going with there lecture. Consequently, it ha...
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Line 5, column 451, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun days is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ce. In case, if they happen to work for less days with longer hours in a day, employ...
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Line 5, column 527, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comes'?
Suggestion: comes
..., employees will feel dauanting when it come accomplishment of their goal. In additi...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...re time efficiently. In conclusion, i support the idea of working five days w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, consequently, first, if, may, moreover, second, so, well, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, in fact, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 81.0 52.1666666667 155% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2246.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 488.0 407.700716846 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60245901639 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70007681154 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30156797213 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.422131147541 0.524837075471 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 668.7 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.8830528993 48.9658058833 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.777777778 100.406767564 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1111111111 20.6045352989 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.77777777778 5.45110844103 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31373447904 0.236089414692 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133178302632 0.076458572812 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0861643329313 0.0737576698707 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231730952253 0.150856017488 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0725602503575 0.0645574589148 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 58.1214874552 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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