Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Communication is one of the issues which has differed human-being from other creatures. People need to make relations with others to have a better life, a better mindset, etc. Friendship is always has been considered the most important type of relationship and community between people. Friendship is defined more than a common relation. Some people believe that people who have more friends would have more benefits, and try to reach new friends. However, some other people believe that friendship is a relationship, which most of the time its profits is not important, and because of this reason state that old friends are real friends. In my view, a person must always try to become friends with new people. In this article, I will delve into two main reasons.
The first reason, which I want to describe is about changing the values during the time. As we grow up and become older, we think differently, and some issues have become valuable for us, which have not been before. For instance, I have an old friend whose name is Ali. We have been friends together since eighteen years ago when we were in middle school. At that time, the only thing, which we thought about is studying and playing electronic games. Our friendship had started by talking about our favorite electronic game. But, since we have entered the university our values have been changed. We have had several contradictions. He is a religious person, and I do not believe in god. He is one of the fanatic servants of the government, but I am on the opposite side of the government. I always think about earning more money, but he is a satisfied person. Due to these serious different thoughts, we have got far from each other day by day. And now I have many different friends whose thoughts are near me.
Secondly, I think having more friends would make us happier due to having more relations. As I mentioned in the first paragraph, due to the human innate attitude, when we have more contact with other people we would be happier people. This matter is even true for introverted people. Psychologists believe that one of the main cures for introverted people to live better in society is having more relations, specifically having more friends. For instance, I have a cousin, named Elahe, who was a depressed introverted person since I have known her. But in the recent two years, she has joined a mountain climbing group, with more than thirty members. Since she has become a member of this group now, she thoroughly has changed. Her personality has completely changed and now she is a happier person.
In conclusion, human has been made as a social creature and needs to be in a community with others. So, we all are demanded of having several communications with others, both for more benefit and having better moments.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 193, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[7]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put between 'has' and 'been'.
Suggestion: has always been
...ife, better mindset, etc. Friendship is always has been considered as the most important type o...
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Line 3, column 957, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...m each other day by day. And now I have many different friends which their thoughts are near m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, i think, in conclusion, talking about, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 15.1003584229 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2330.0 1977.66487455 118% => OK
No of words: 486.0 407.700716846 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79423868313 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69525374022 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60191022753 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.475308641975 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 722.7 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6003584229 150% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.7771049674 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.1612903226 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6774193548 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.54838709677 5.45110844103 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 11.8709677419 177% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128999173212 0.236089414692 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0400643103923 0.076458572812 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429936515676 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0899785907912 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0424184368576 0.0645574589148 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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