It is obvious that today with the development of technology, one of the human’s goals is to travel to space and conduct space research. Although spending a lot of money on space explorations will have long-term effects on human life and will increase human’s knowledge about outer space, I strongly believe that it is much better for governments to assign money to other important purposes which will be useful for human beings who currently live on the Earth. In the following paragraphs I will discuss my views using some reasons and examples.
I think that there are more crucial and vital problems all over the world which authorities need to investigate and solve. It is essential that governments allocate a large amount of money to more immediate and urgent matters such as lack of food resources, health services, medical facilities, education, and so on. Therefore, spending money to improve the living conditions of people has top priority over investing a huge amount of money in space research projects. For example, there are many areas around the word in which people do not have access to basic facilities including sufficient food and health care. Thus, government must first try to provide necessary services for these people and invest in improving poor people life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, therefore, thus, as to, for example, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 43.0788530466 28% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1094.0 1977.66487455 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 212.0 407.700716846 52% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16037735849 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 4.48103885553 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72455378131 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 212.727598566 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646226415094 0.524837075471 123% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 618.680645161 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6003584229 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.9245128692 48.9658058833 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.75 100.406767564 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 20.6045352989 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 5.45110844103 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.53405017921 44% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203782054507 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0791609795823 0.076458572812 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646758391317 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15246914611 0.150856017488 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0513272113765 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 11.7677419355 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 58.1214874552 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.01818996416 116% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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