Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: "Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.”
Although many believed lives were more simple in the past and people were less worried and happier than now, I strongly oppose that idea. The reason for this is that not only the growth of technology made our life easier but also having more knowledge led us to live healthier and longer in comparison to the past.
To begin with, one can see the help of new technology in our daily works. In contrast to back then, most of our routine tasks are done easier and faster. Take the recent way of transportation for examples. In the past traveling was remarkably difficult, costly and time consuming and not every person had the possibility of going where he wants. While, by the use of airplanes or fast trains with less price and wasting time, every person could go as far as he wishes.
In addition to the reason mentioned above, today we communicate as easy as a piece of cake. In contrast to the difficult ways of sending our messages through writing letters or telegramming in the past, by using of the new applications which are based on the internet we can talk to each other easier. My own experience demonstrates this concept. When I was a child my uncle lived in other country and my grandmother was always worried about him and missed him a lot. However, my mother and I are living in different and far away countries and by the use of internet not only we are in touch every minute but also every night I see my family through the mean of video conferencing. Therefore, today I’m in touch with my beloved ones more than what my grandparents did.
Finally, the impact of improvement of new medical treatment is the most important factor of living better. By Considering that people in the past felt more pain than we do today or lost their family and friends just because of not existing any cure of many diseases, everyone could understand that our life is much happier than our grandparent’s life.
To put it briefly, By being more connected to each other, being healthier and having less difficulty in our daily life, evidently, we feel more relief and happier than that people in that past do.
- tpo 49 - writing 1 88
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement For any business to be successful it must spend a lot of money on advertising 65
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: in twenty years there will be fewer cars on the road than there are today. 70
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: "Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.” 90
- tpo 42 - w1 60
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, but, finally, however, if, so, then, therefore, while, for example, in addition, in contrast, in contrast to, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1753.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 377.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64986737401 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59376844655 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541114058355 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.7630738835 48.9658058833 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.5625 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5625 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.625 5.45110844103 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18010744877 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0546921286019 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616105970297 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0991029278937 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0295214309202 0.0645574589148 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.