Mobile phones developed rapidly over a period of time. The technology emerged greatly with each passing days which gave freedom for every individual to put forward his/her own thoughts or ideas. I strongly agree with the statement that Mobile phones have given people freedom using three reasons. To elaborate one has to go through scrupulous discussion below.
Firstly, there are several apps developed now a days. For instance, there are popular apps such as Instagram, Facebook where people are utilizing it as a medium to post about an incident immediately. During a period when there were no such apps people used to believe that was telecasted in news channels but now a days one could easily access the truth that had happened over there with videos posted as a proof. By this way, more positive content is reaching to a greater number of people.
Secondly, it is providing employment in one way or other. For instance, enumerate influencers emerged in the last few years whether its a field related to fashion or beauty. They will get money by promoting good brands which can be helpful for myriad number of people. Also, the websites for online business developed and many entrepreneurs benefitted from it especially women who might have sit at home doing household chores if such technology had not developed.
Furthermore, every single individual is owing a mobile phone giving them access and freedom to call anyone they want and express their feelings on various social platform. Even though, there are few negative points such as a teenager getting too much attention through reels videos and snap chat filters leading them to neglect their studies there are more positives when things are kept under control. One can use the same as an educational tool which as carious platforms to enroll for a program and excel in it.
To conclude, many will argue that nothing has changed even after Mobile phones are introduced. It is for those who are not up to date with emerging technology and the latest improvements. Mobile phones have become essential gadget in everyone's life from a wake up call to a reminder at night to go to bed. In future there are more chances that they are available at even low prices making them accessible to even under developed people for more educational and development purposes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 40, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
Mobile phones developed rapidly over a period of time. The technology emerged greatly with ea...
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Line 2, column 43, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...rstly, there are several apps developed now a days. For instance, there are popular apps s...
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Line 2, column 47, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...y, there are several apps developed now a days. For instance, there are popular apps s...
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Line 2, column 309, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...hat was telecasted in news channels but now a days one could easily access the truth that ...
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Line 3, column 132, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...s emerged in the last few years whether its a field related to fashion or beauty. T...
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Line 3, column 392, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'sat'.
Suggestion: sat
...from it especially women who might have sit at home doing household chores if such ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, as to, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1934.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 390.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95897435897 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54826390219 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589743589744 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 630.9 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1164507542 48.9658058833 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.789473684 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5263157895 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94736842105 5.45110844103 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195604543933 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0610747203863 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0954773132759 0.0737576698707 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11233144227 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0830805541489 0.0645574589148 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.