In today's faced-paced and money-oriented world, charity plays a vital role in pleasure and satisfaction in our lives. A controversial question regarding this issue is whether people who have money as well as make money should contribute to charity and help homeless, etc. or otherwise. Some people believe that everyone who make money more, should allocate to charity, whereas others disagree. I am of the opinion that; it should be a duty for human being helping and giving spars money to who or organization which money is indispensable for them for some reasons. In ensuing lines, I will address the most discernible reasons.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that charity makes feel better and pleasure in everybody's life. In fact, when a person helps other who need more money, this work not only leads to make progress in the other life, but also brings about feel happy for his/her. For instance, my mother always allocates an especial money or other worthy thing to our neighborhood who has an awesome disease. This work, made my mother and us happy and also help him to allocate the money for his children. A matter of the fact, charity is inside of every one, we just need to active it. As you can see, charity causes feeling better when we are helping each other.
Another noteworthy aspect that should be reflected in this explanation is that helping other leads to many people that could not study for economical issue, by this work, they will be able to continue their studies. for instance, the most money in this world have been caught in just less than five percent of people, so if these people want to help who need money and facilities for survival, so most of their problems would be solved. As a result, if people throughout the world have charity, with confidence can say the poverty will be destroyed.
Last but not least, money is an integral part of today's life and can pave the way toward better life. Therefore, everybody who have adequate money if allocate some of them to other who need money e.g., homeless, labor children, our plant will be better place for next generation. Moreover, a good economic situation in an area around the world causes to avoid from war and other catastrophic occurrences. For instance, the most war that exist currently in our world is because of terrible economic statue, so one way to prevent of keeping on this circumstance is that, wealthy country helps to poor country.
In light of these crucial reasons. I have strictly come to believe that charity is very momentous for every society to make progress equally. Give the above, charity not only can give people feel pleasure, but also can help who need money to keep on her or his study. That is why I believe that charity must be one of mandatory thing for everyone in a society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 217, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...will be able to continue their studies. for instance, the most money in this world ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, e.g., first, if, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, well, whereas, for instance, in fact, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 9.8082437276 214% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 23.0 11.0286738351 209% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2333.0 1977.66487455 118% => OK
No of words: 490.0 407.700716846 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7612244898 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70488508055 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49153920235 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487755102041 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 743.4 618.680645161 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1273342806 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.045454545 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2727272727 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.68181818182 5.45110844103 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1641543643 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0512795068069 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618805541248 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101558824387 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639697094173 0.0645574589148 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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