Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The most important ways to improve the people’s health is to clean the environment.
In our epoch with improving social awareness, there are varies kinds of ways that people utilize to prevent illnesses. In addition; humans are always searching for the most significant ways that could increase the quality of their health. In my opinion, the initial way that we could exploit to boost our health is by cleaning our setting. I will expand on my notion in the following paragraphs.
My first and foremost belief is that there are lots of illnesses that come from dust and pollutions around us in enviroment. In addition, pollution brings bad feelings for people and causes anxiety and stress on them. A guy hardly understands the source of the feeling, besides all of us know that the stress is the mother of all ailments; therefore, just by not cleaning the surroundings we will invite various kinds of mental and body diseases. A few years ago I read a paper about how dust and pollutions could affect health. That was an experiment on several groups of people living in neat places and messy places; statistics showed that peoples, having clean surroundings were healthier than the groups with a messy environment both mentally and physically. In conclusion to this reason, if we want a wholesome lifestyle, we should keep our environment empty of pollutions. Also it is good for the animals and plants that are the prominent elements in our foods cycle.
My latter reason that I assert is that the cleaning environment is economical. The first step of being healthy is to not in touch with things making diseases, so why we do not keep our surrounding clean instead of spending much money on treatment that just comes from our messy environment. I have a personal experience about this notion, a few years ago I was very busy with my carrier and education, so I did not have enough time cleaning my house and also the park that placed near me was very messy and filthy that nobody went there, besides I believed “cleaning squanders my time and energy instead of that I could do my projects and spend time with my friends”. After a while with those conditions, I got breath defection (respiratory diseases). I did not know the reason because I exercised and ate healthy foods. When I attended the doctor, I surprised because she said that it was the effect of dust. After that, I spent a large amount of money for my sickness. Indeed if I was clean at first, I was not forced to dedicate money for treatments. Unfortunately, now after years from my ailment, there are signs of the disease and I have had mild breath defection.
To make a long story short, keeping the environment neat is the most significant and primary way of avoiding illnesses. In our mundane life, there are lots of dust and pollution in the air, maybe we think that they are very tiny in order to make us sick, but the reality is that they make us sick. Also, messy surrounding has a bad effect on our mind and causes some psychologically mental defections. In the end, to save our money it is highly recommended that an ounce of prevention is better than a pound of cure.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, may, so, therefore, while, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.0286738351 190% => OK
Pronoun: 80.0 43.0788530466 186% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2530.0 1977.66487455 128% => OK
No of words: 541.0 407.700716846 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67652495379 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82280071112 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66965473794 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 265.0 212.727598566 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.489833641405 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 778.5 618.680645161 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 4.94265232975 263% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.5349443551 48.9658058833 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.416666667 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5416666667 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.125 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.85842293907 285% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176231357772 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0486878469162 0.076458572812 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500054400464 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117482643049 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0673959089355 0.0645574589148 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 86.8835125448 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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