Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Our current way of life will have a negative impact on future generations

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Our current way of life will have a negative impact on future generations

It is known that climate changes, ozone layer disturbance, global warming and some species extinction are all consequences of human behavior. It is necessary that society understand that changes must be done to save our planet and future generations from an ineffable deterioration. I strongly support the idea that our current life style will have a nefarious effect on future generations. I feel this way for the following reasons.

Firstly, nowadays the main energy source globaly used come from non-renewable sources like oil. The lack of investments on renewable sources of energy such as solar and eolic is a huge problem that we face today. On the future oil could be no longer available and without previous investments on other alternatives, future generations could face shortage in various fields and serious economic problems due to the current misuse of energy sources.

Secondly, pollution levels had increased a lot last decades. There is a lack of public policies to face this problem. For example, some kind of penalty should be applied to industries, companies and cars owners in order to reduce gas emition. The consequences of these notorious increase in polution affect current society and could affect future generations also. Since new respiratory and other kinds of diseases may appear in consequence of that.

Finally, the wrong waste disposal affect our water resources and soil globaly. Efforts should be made by society and politicians to find a way to avoid domestic and industrial incorrect waste diposal. Industrial waste can be more dangerous and fatal, since they may contain chemicals nocive to our health. We should protect our soil and water, otherwise future generations will be not able to harvest their own food leading to a global starving.

To sum up, I strongly believe that our nowadays routine life will have a negative impact on future generations. This is mainly because our bad usage of natural resources and lack of investments on environment friendly technologies.

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Average: 7.6 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 360, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...ety and could affect future generations also. Since new respiratory and other kinds ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, i feel, kind of, such as, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1705.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 323.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2786377709 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83714332432 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600619195046 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.2553026895 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.7222222222 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9444444444 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11111111111 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.85842293907 311% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236473657311 0.236089414692 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0687468316703 0.076458572812 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0859270888495 0.0737576698707 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133730295895 0.150856017488 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0787176146675 0.0645574589148 122% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.01818996416 117% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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