The issue here is wheter partents are the best teachers or not. Some might hold the opinion that parents are not qualified enoguth to give education to their children. In my opinion, I believe that parents are the best teachers, even when they are not intended to. My view can be greatly substantiated by the reasons addressed below.
Firstly, children learn their moral values mostly from parents. There is a famous proverb 'parents are their childrens' mirror'. Children learn ethics from every choices their parents make. For instance, one hihgly repsected and renowned proffesor at Seoul National University, once pointed out that not only genetics but also environmental factors such as moral values and personality is also inherited. Since families share the same socioeconomic environment, family members are prone to be situated in similar circumstances and make similar choices. Finally, parents are teachers who has gerat impact on children's moral formation.
Moreover, children learn their cultural heritage from parents. Recently, the world is becoming globalized and people encounter different types of people from diverse ethinic, religious, and cultural background. In this complicated society, the importance of realizing individual's identity is being emphasized. For instance, children learn their root from their families. Family share similar experiences through events such as wedding, funeral, baptism, and cultural Holidays. Children naturally learn where they came from, and who they are from these cultural education, and parents are usually the guides to show those new heritages and cultures to their children.
Finally, children acquire political knowledge from their parents. Parent's views and political stance gives a great impact to their children. According to a recent survey conducted in the Seoul City by a well-known research firm in Korea, 70% of the respondents replied that parents and their children supported the same political party during the election season. Since families share similar socioeconomic status, they are also likely to share similar politcial decision.
In conclusion, Parents are very influential and their education is very effective in forming their children's nature and values because children learn moral values, cultural heritage, and political knowledge from their parents. Therfore, I definitely think that parents are the best teachers.
- It is more important for students to understand ideas and concepts than it is for them to learn facts 78
- More and more people are suffering from health problems caused by a modern lifestyle which cannot be treated with modern medicines Some people think that a return to traditional medicine should be encouraged To what extend do you agree 73
- School used to offer three after class activities 1 sports 2 art 3 volunteering This year school s extra money may only can offer one activity Which one do you choose and why 76
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Human activity is making the earth a worse place to live Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 90
- School used to offer three after class activities 1 sports 2 art 3 volunteering This year school s extra money may only can offer one activity Which one do you choose and why 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 269, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...ed society, the importance of realizing individuals identity is being emphasized. For insta...
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Line 6, column 412, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...Family share similar experiences through events such as wedding, funeral, baptism...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2056.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 359.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.72701949861 4.8611393121 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7017574523 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548746518106 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 631.8 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.7347614722 48.9658058833 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4545454545 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3181818182 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.04545454545 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0725556369652 0.236089414692 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0318993491124 0.076458572812 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0362644056189 0.0737576698707 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0565745375874 0.150856017488 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0367150993284 0.0645574589148 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 58.1214874552 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.66 10.9000537634 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.01818996416 119% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 86.8835125448 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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