Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Parents today are more involved in their children's education than parents were in the past.
Education is the most significant part of a child's life and their future career is somewhat related to their education path. Parents also play a vital role in their development due to their help, directly and indirectly. In the past parents did not pay much attention to education, even some of them did not let their kids go to school. Now a day, people are more aware of education's benefit and everyone wants to raise educated children. Some people, including me, believe that parents today are more involved in their children's education than parents were in the past. In this essay, I am going to explain three potential reasons to support my opinion.
First of all, the parents are more educated and knowledgable today. Through time, education takes part more in society and people's life cycle. In the past, human beings did not notice that with the increase in educated people- engineers, doctors, and scientists- they can develop many things and they will have a convenient life. So, as a result of huge attention to education, parents became more involved in helping their children to study well. For example, when I was in elementary school, my mom did not pay much attention to which grade I got in my lessons, but about 10 years later the education system became more complex and competitive and parents tried so hard to improve their child's skills to be the best in the class.
Secondly, parents are not as busy as they were in the past. In the past because of the lack of technology and facilities, people, especially mothers, were busy with doing household tasks and they could not find enough time to evaluate or help their children with school tasks. I do not want to ignore that parents work harder in their workplace these days, but in the past, the tasks were more physical. Therefore, parents became more tired and exhausted. Parents spend more time with their kids and also the connection between schools and parents became more strong and improved. there are lots of sessions hold on to inform parents and give them information about how their child acts in school.
To sum up, as I mentioned above, with the growth of education among people and parents, everyone became more aware of the role of education in their kid's life and try to be more involved. And also parents have more time to spend with their children and their schools. So, in my opinion, parents today are more involved in their children's education than parents were in the past.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 582, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
...arents became more strong and improved. there are lots of sessions hold on to inform ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, even so, for example, as a result, first of all, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 52.1666666667 136% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2052.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 428.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79439252336 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.548423998 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40556644774 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.476635514019 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 639.9 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.8189931833 48.9658058833 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.6 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.7 5.45110844103 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.506459061389 0.236089414692 215% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.2004529609 0.076458572812 262% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138849780507 0.0737576698707 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.376304250819 0.150856017488 249% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0777418007326 0.0645574589148 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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