Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Without a doubt, independence has been one of the most important concerns of every individual through history, and it is critically important that people be able to make decisions about their own lives. While many believe in comparison with the past, young people are more independent in order to make a decision, others disagree with this idea. I strongly believe that nowadays, youth are more independent from family attachments and are able to manage their life. I feel this way for two main reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, it is crystal clear that due to the emergence of the internet and technological advances, people are now more exposed to new information and are open to new ideas about life. In other words, the internet plays an influential role in educating people. For instance, parents now are more concerned about how to raise independent children. in this regard, they are provided with a vast range of books, tutorials, and online courses which encourage them to let their children make their own decision from childhood. For example, it is an accepted fact that children are allowed to choose the color of their clothes, their toys and even they can easily decide about which school they want to enroll.
Furthermore, life in the past was more limited and people had to obey their parent’s decisions in different aspects, like marriage. In contrast, nowadays teenagers and young adults easily insist on things they are interested in from, lifestyle, their major of study or their career. Additionally, going to college and university abroad is one of the other changes that now is considered normal. consequently, youth are provided with a lot of opportunities in which there are free to make decisions and consult with their peers instead of their family and parents. Consequently, all these changes lead people to have a more independent life in which they practice decision-making on every given day. As a result, the more people get to make decisions, the better they are able to manage their life.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that in comparison with past, young people now living a freer life from their family attachments, and are able to make better decisions. The emergence of the internet has helped parents to raise their children more independently, on top of that altering lifestyles inevitably result in more independent people. Today's life offers a huge range of options like going to college abroad which provide the platform for self-supporting people.
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Suggestion: In
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Suggestion: Consequently
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, if, so, while, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, in contrast, as a result, in other words, to begin with, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 52.1666666667 136% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2128.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 418.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09090909091 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77843804235 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.483253588517 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 676.8 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0762717337 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.222222222 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2222222222 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.05555555556 5.45110844103 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363445715344 0.236089414692 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121502042218 0.076458572812 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0802655209173 0.0737576698707 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.246895022458 0.150856017488 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430252173435 0.0645574589148 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 11.7677419355 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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