No one can deny that there is both positive and negative aspects of depending on parents for making decisions of one's own life. People from all the centuries of human civilization would agree that yound people depended on their parents. But this culture is declining in a massive pace. Consequently, today's young sters have developed the skill of taking their own decison, which was quite impossible in the past.
To begin with, people of past had a narrow outlook. To illustrate, there were less access to internet in the past which inhibited them to learn the world from a young age. On the contrary, today people have very easy access to the knowledge sea of internet, from where they can learn different things. In this process, one finds which topics interests him and which doesn't. So, it is easy for him to take decisions from experiences of other people, that is learnt from internet.I have to admit that my opinion on this matter is profoundly influenced by my own personal opinion. You see, my father depended too much on my grandfather to take his career decision as he had no knowledge pros and cons of available professions. But, my brother, on the other hand, took his carrer decision all by himself beacause he learnt about all the good and bad sides of different jobs from internet. As a result, he was better able to take his own decision. For this reason, I think past people's dependence on parents for decision making was largely due to the lack of internet access.
Secondly, people of today's age practice much more individualism than people form past. Nowadays, people are more independent and self-oriented. They prefer to take their decison by themselves. They even get offended if someone gives exxcessive advice to them. So they are better able to take their own decsions. Drawing from my own experience, I left my home after I passed the age of 18 because I though I can live by myself. But it would have been impossible for me if I had lived in an early time. My parents would not have let me to leave my home because they would have been concerned about my future. But, today's parents believe that their child can live by themselves. It is clear to see why decision taking is easy now than the past.
In light of the above-mentioned reasons, it is evident that today young people are better able to take their decision than past. As long as some measurements are performed and some areas are involved, it is my firm believe that this claim would be held true.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
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Suggestion: I
...er people, that is learnt from internet.I have to admit that my opinion on this m...
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Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, look, second, secondly, so, i think, as a result, on the contrary, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 63.0 43.0788530466 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2057.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 440.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.675 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57997565096 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55057824427 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.493181818182 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 648.0 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.2899491189 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.28 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336695388289 0.236089414692 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0978718874725 0.076458572812 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0811662224428 0.0737576698707 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226591474615 0.150856017488 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0468235901441 0.0645574589148 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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