Young people are more or less dependent on their parents. Whether they heavily rely on their parents to make decisions or not defers from person to person, but I believe that adolescents nowadays are better at making decisions by themselves. I will argue from two perspectives, which I will explore in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, younger generation is exposed to an outpouring of information on a daily basis thanks to the internet. This could not be attained thirty years ago. They are accustomed to using social networking services or world wide web, which means they are constantly in touch with myriads of pieces of information. The internet has enabled us to keep in touch with our friends with just several clicks. Personally, I have my facebook account, my instagram account, and the like. These social changes have brought about a more facile access to their questions about anything. For instance, young people can count on their online friends to ask about their relationship with the parents or other friends. The internet has offered other options than to count on one's parents. It is obvious that the internet has functioned to keep adolescents away from their parents.
Another change I have to point out is that the social structure has changed over the decades. In my country, it was a common assumption until few decades ago that people are married to the certain partner who their parents believed is a good one. This notion began to change about twenty years ago, when same-sex marriages started to be acknowledged as a form of love. Before that, people have to take their parents' thoughts into consideration. However, now young people are free from their parents when they want to get married. This kind of social changes have served as a catalyst for less dependency of younger generation on their parents.
These two viewpoints, the internet and the change in social structure, made it clear that young people nowadays are less dependent on their parents than they are in the past. Therefore, I am convinced that the presented statement is true.
- kouryaku
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement People communicate with each other less than in the past because of the popularity of television Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion 60
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement It is important to know about events happening around the world even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 76
- kouryaku
- It is more important for governments to spend money to improve Internet access than to improve public transportation 66
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, so, therefore, for instance, kind of, more or less, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1742.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 349.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99140401146 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62583336525 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532951289398 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.9532277942 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.1 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.45 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.95 5.45110844103 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301950151313 0.236089414692 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0875920674147 0.076458572812 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0873094549314 0.0737576698707 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199077318306 0.150856017488 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484926531338 0.0645574589148 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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