Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Decision making in the past is used to made by parents especially in Chinese society where seniority in a family matter severely. On the other hand, in the modern era, as the ideology of self-independence is currently spreading among young people, a lot of people believe that young folks are now gaining the right to make decisions by themselves. However, in my perspective, while I do agree with the statement that young people are now less dependent on their parents to an extent, I do think that it depends on scenarios as illustrated in the following paragraph.
First, I want to put attention to choosing schools. I think that the decision of choosing people’s schools is still rarely made by students regardless of the time. The reasons being that students are the younger generations in the category of “young people”, which parents tend to still see their children as unmatured instead of trusting them, therefore, it’s unlikely that students get a chance to choose their school. The other more practical reason is the fact that most students are certainly not financially independent, which means that their parents have absolute dominance when it comes to choosing a school because it is them who pays the tuition.
Second, with all that being said, there’s still some positive progress being made, that is, deciding marriage. In the past, where the interest of a family is on top of the interest of a person, it’s normal that marriage is decided even before a child is born because of some miscellaneous factors such as political reasons that might involve in the marriage. As for now, the sense of family and inheritance isn’t the mainstream anymore, young people such as princess Harry, who had quite the royal membership for marrying Megan, are taking back the right of deciding their marriage.
Lastly, there’s also something that is always being decided by young people, which is making friends. Although parents can control the friends their kids make, but only to an extent because it’s not feasible for parents to follow the kids all day in school just for this reason.
To wrap it up, I think the trend of the society is shifting towards the younger generation in terms of the right to make decisions for sure, but in its current state, I do believe that young people is still very dependent on their parents in some circumstances.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 91, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to people'
Suggestion: to people
.... I think that the decision of choosing people’s schools is still rarely made by stude...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, lastly, second, so, still, therefore, while, as for, i think, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 13.8261648746 22% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 22.0 11.0286738351 199% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1985.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 400.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9625 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66001762212 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 593.1 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.1344086022 149% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.1022551738 48.9658058833 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.692307692 100.406767564 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.7692307692 20.6045352989 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.15384615385 5.45110844103 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.37866594958 0.236089414692 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129012049249 0.076458572812 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.082316244444 0.0737576698707 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216809904631 0.150856017488 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0920216378088 0.0645574589148 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 11.7677419355 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.08 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.0537634409 139% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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