Not long ago there were a time that due to lack of the adequate transport system people didn’t travel much or even if they did it was so slow that going abroad was just a far-fetched dream. But in this advanced era with extensively developed technology, people are constantly looking for ways to run away from the hustle and the bustle of the urban zones and what is better than a trip even a brief one.
Choosing a place for a trip is highly depended to factors like the financial affordability, time available for the trip or even to the visa permission these days. The major reason why people choose to go on a trip in domestic cities can be the high cost of travelling abroad which is exactly the contrary in countries with high cost of livings. Additionally, the visa issues and the high level of stress and the anxiety has accommodated some people to choose their own country on the foreign ones. For instance, it was this summer that my family and I applied for the tourism visa for Canada but after a month we got the rejection mail which was so depressing for us that after spending a huge amount of money on applying and having a trip to another country for giving our biometrics.
Tourism industry has become a huge lucrative income for lots of the countries although some are more prosperous than others. However, the money flow is not the only fruit of this industry, thanks to it nowadays people know more about other countries including their culture, weather, outstanding monuments and also their history which is a great achivement for countries with advantagouse and effectual tourism and for people who travel to foreign countries. Furthermore, this industry has help countries to attract imigrants and international students from all over the world which is a highly profitable and it’s role in country’s economy is indespensable also, it has changed lots of people lives and made them able to get education in high quality and be effective in future for both their country and the world.
Personally saying, we all know plenty about our country and it’ history but when it comes to other countries not a lot to say which is a pity. Humanity started as one and it should countinue as one and getting the opportunity to know about other people with variety of cultures, like their foods, or different history and the factors helped them to grow and extent their country or their secret and prior reason of development or how they manage their country or their technology all can be inspiring to people from other countries.
Consequently, though countries try to motivate their own citizens to have a domestic travel for economic reasons, and their great attempt to appeal foreign people, I always prefered the trips out side if the country for the influence it has on boardening my horizons and vasting my knowledge about the life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 75, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'domestic travel'.
Suggestion: domestic travel
... to motivate their own citizens to have a domestic travel for economic reasons, and their great a...
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Line 5, column 193, Rule ID: OUT_SIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'outside'?
Suggestion: outside
...ign people, I always prefered the trips out side if the country for the influence it has...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, look, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 31.0 13.8261648746 224% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2383.0 1977.66487455 120% => OK
No of words: 495.0 407.700716846 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81414141414 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71684168287 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65184586682 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.49696969697 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 744.3 618.680645161 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 20.1344086022 204% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.3905289539 48.9658058833 183% => OK
Chars per sentence: 198.583333333 100.406767564 198% => OK
Words per sentence: 41.25 20.6045352989 200% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.08333333333 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233014650925 0.236089414692 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0950382037279 0.076458572812 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572467760126 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138604096489 0.150856017488 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373384145222 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.9 11.7677419355 186% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.32 58.1214874552 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 10.1575268817 178% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.51 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.01818996416 116% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 86.8835125448 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 10.002688172 185% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.0537634409 183% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.247311828 185% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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