Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? “People should keep trying to reach their goals, even if they seem impossible to achieve.” Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position.
It is critically important that we have goals to achieve in our life. Personally, I believe individuals should follow their dreams and try to achieve them even if they are unachievable. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First, Having dreams even though they seem hard to achieve is the greatest motivation in our life. Since ever, the human had tried to achieve the impossible such as, reaching the moon, inventing electricity, and building the technology. Even though these goals seemed unattainable at first, with the hard-working and insisting they became possible. My personal experience is a compelling illustration of this example. When I was a student at the university, I dreamed to be one of the best 5% in my department. Even though this goal seemed unachievable at first, I did it because of my hard-working. So, the example is a clear illustration of the idea which says " when you never give up, all your dreams will come true".
Second, the confidence and blessed you feel after achieving your goals. The individual cannot describe the feeling of confidence and happiness which follow the moment of getting what you want in words. For instance, when I achieved my goal of becoming one of the best 5% in my department, I was so proud and jubilant about my achievement. Human always feels that he/she is unstoppable after achieving their goals. On the other hand, some people may become sad and bleak after putting an effort into something they could not achieve. However, these people cannot deny that the works made them better and they learn from their experience.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that people should follow their goals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, second, so, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 287.0 407.700716846 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98606271777 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79441205346 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 618.680645161 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.4538970225 48.9658058833 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.1764705882 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8823529412 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88235294118 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275990523273 0.236089414692 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0868561409494 0.076458572812 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595957085308 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174061966236 0.150856017488 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0201044649831 0.0645574589148 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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