Nowadays, the world is developed and intricate, and the result of different technology is responsibility weakness. I entirely agree with this statement that today's members of the public neglect their duty and obligations. There are several reasons why I feel like this that I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, mastering new technologies and devices is obvious, and everywhere you can see progressive programs. Everyone has a smartphone or smart television and smart home in this situation. Daily work is done with ease and convenience, and there is no need to do it like before. As a result, the public members would not be willing to do their duty and become far less responsible than before. My personal experience is a compelling example of this; in the past years, I was responsible for daily purchases, and for the sake of that, I had to go out and buy everything that I wanted, but nowadays, I am set on the couch and orderer my requirements thus my interactions have been changed, and my contributions in altruism activities have been reduced because I used to go charity before shopping.
Secondly, today's aims are different from the past as well; in the past, some of the duties were worthwhile, but in the present, priorities have been changed, and people are finding new goals while previous obligations are no longer attractive to them. So they are not adhering as before to some duties. For instance, before now, children were more responsible for maintaining their old parents, but today this duty has been transferred to nursing homes.
The last point but not least is that social interactions are not like in the past; using social media is more popular, and each and everyone spends a huge time in that. In the past, people went to visit each other once or twice a week, so they allocate more time for their work, but today everyone wants to report his or her daily routine to others with pictures and films. So they spend substantial time on social media. For example, my sister spends all her free time on social media, does not cook as well as before, and orders a meal from food programs.
By Considering all points, present situations make the public members less responsible, and different companies and programs do tasks. For the sake of that, I am guessing that our society suffers from the consequences of lacking obligations and responsibility.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, i feel, as a result, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 29.0 13.8261648746 210% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1993.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 409.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8728606357 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79306440036 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535452322738 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 625.5 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 13.0 1.86738351254 696% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 82.0903797642 48.9658058833 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.235294118 100.406767564 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0588235294 20.6045352989 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58823529412 5.45110844103 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189240501725 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.057202961953 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457586805926 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0939130675501 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428936325455 0.0645574589148 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 11.7677419355 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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