Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: "A person should never make an important decision alone."
People are social beings as it was correctly stated by Aristotle philosopher. Humans should interact with each other and through this process to balance themselves. I definitely believe in the power of communication and discussion between people and I think it is the best way that someone should always use when he is called to make an important decision. Some of the most important reasons supporting the claim that a person should never make a crucial decision alone would be discussed below.
First of all, when a person has to make a really important decision for his life, it is mathematically assured that he will be under a high pressure and stress conditions. Under the control of these factors, the individual is not able to think objectively and with a critical mind and he would most probably do wrong steps based exclusively on emotions. Therefore, a discussion with people that he trusts will help him to keep his self-control and feel support from his surroundings. Thus mistaken decisions could be avoided.
Furthermore, the discussion about a crucial topic that requires a decision making would enlighten some sides of the topic that the individual had not previously considered by himself. Through this process, the advantages and drawbacks of a particular decision would be revealed and the potential results would be evaluated more completed. Two minds are always better and more effective than one. It is impossible for someone to know everything and always to be correct. Thus, a discussion with another person would have contributed to a more mature and true conclusion related to the decision.
Finally, it should be mentioned that through the process of discussion with his fellow-men the person often realizes what he really desires and his expectations based on a decision. In other words, he has the chance to better orient his will and understand his priorities
To sum up, taking into account all things have been spoken above it could be concluded that a person should always seek advice and different assessments made by his trustable ones for an important decision so a better choice could be done.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, if, really, so, therefore, thus, as to, i think, first of all, in other words, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1796.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 352.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10227272727 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83508493904 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525568181818 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 555.3 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.3646037379 48.9658058833 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.733333333 100.406767564 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4666666667 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.13333333333 5.45110844103 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172757469645 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0626552742623 0.076458572812 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516645984598 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105831703603 0.150856017488 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0512858096826 0.0645574589148 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.