Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Playing computer games is a waste of time. Children should not be allowed to play them.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Computers games are a device for entertainment that paly by children and adults. Some parents prefer their children to play computer games and allow them to play all the time. In another hand, there are parents who do not allow their children to play at all; they do not even buy such games for their children. Personally speaking, I think playing computer games must be controlled. Parents should limit their children to playing computer games.
This is undeniable that computer games are very attractive for children because those games are prepared in many ways to be used by children. So, what parents must do is to make a plan for their children. In that plan, children can play computer games in a determined time, for example, they can play those games for two hours in a day and more than two hours will be a waste of time because children must do other things such as exercising, playing games with a group of children. For example, my niece is five years old, and she plays computer games for one hour a day. She loves computer games, but she is not addicted to them, because my sister does not allow her to play such games all day. Therefore, she has enough time to play with her friends. They go outside the house and play with their toys. Sometimes they do exercise with each other. They also do their school works with each other, so my sister is relieved about playing computer games with her daughter.
To sum up, as I mentioned and exampled, Playing computer games can be good and do not be a waste of time. if they are used in a proper way.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
... be good and do not be a waste of time. if they are used in a proper way.
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Message: “if” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... be good and do not be a waste of time. if they are used in a proper way.
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Message: Consider replacing "in a proper way" with adverb for "proper"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ot be a waste of time. if they are used in a proper way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, for example, i think, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1277.0 1977.66487455 65% => OK
No of words: 284.0 407.700716846 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49647887324 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28506477536 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 212.727598566 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.461267605634 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 391.5 618.680645161 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.4310627558 48.9658058833 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.8125 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 5.45110844103 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.403404529253 0.236089414692 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.170520526059 0.076458572812 223% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0810808184003 0.0737576698707 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.320656657377 0.150856017488 213% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.025135287601 0.0645574589148 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 11.7677419355 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.37 8.01818996416 79% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 86.8835125448 39% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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