Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Students are more influenced by their teachers than by their friends.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Teachers are the integral part of the student life. Although some people believe that friends are the most influential people in a student's life, I believe that students are greatly motivated by their teachers. I firmly believe this way because of several reasons, and I will elaborate on these in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, teachers play a vital role when it comes to education. Starting from our primary school to university life, teachers always enlighten us with their vast knowledge. Moreover, they are the experts in their domain and hence they guide us in every possible way to achieve our goal in our life. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter is profoundly influenced by my own experience. While I was in my school, I remembered I was very poor in mathematics. Oneday me and my friend were playing math puzzles and I failed to solve many puzzles, which my friends solved in just a matter of a few seconds. I felt so embarrassed that I decided to quit my study. But I decided to talk to my math teacher regarding this and she started teaching me mathematics twice in every week. As a result, I improved my logical thinking and problem solving skill so well that I secured full marks in my board exam. For this reason, if Rita mam had never taught me math, I would have never realized how interesting this subject is.
Secondly, a teacher's contribution to a student's life is not limited to education, rather they help us to become a great human being in every aspect of our life. Teachers bring us some commendable qualities in our life: discipline, kindness, a great mindset to help people in their need and devoting yourself for the betterment of society. Drawing from my own experience, my school was extremely strict in setting out the rules for their students. No one was allowed to enter school after 9 AM and can leave school before 5 PM. Everyday we used to have a prayer for more than half an hour. Back then, we used to get so bored and started finding some ways to avoid this and unfortunately, one day we were caught red handed by our principle. As a result, our parents were being called as we violated the school policy. On that day itself, I realized that it's very important to be disciplined in our life. It's clearly clear that the lesson I learned that really helped me throughout my life to be a responsible citizen.
In the light of the above mentioned reason, I believe that teachers show us the door to a new world full of opportunities. This is because they make us better in every possible way by giving us proper education and culture.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 132, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...ds are the most influential people in a students life, I believe that students are great...
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Line 3, column 790, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g me mathematics twice in every week. As a result, I improved my logical thinking...
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Line 6, column 13, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'teachers'' or 'teacher's'?
Suggestion: teachers'; teacher's
...sting this subject is. Secondly, a teachers contribution to a students life is not ...
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Line 6, column 40, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
... Secondly, a teachers contribution to a students life is not limited to education, rathe...
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Line 6, column 528, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[1]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective, and the comma is missing. Did you mean 'every day, we'?
Suggestion: Every day, we
... 9 AM and can leave school before 5 PM. Everyday we used to have a prayer for more than hal...
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Line 8, column 225, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...giving us proper education and culture.
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, moreover, really, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 85.0 43.0788530466 197% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2153.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 468.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60042735043 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65116196802 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62830848939 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 252.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 676.8 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2583637915 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.12 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.72 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.48 5.45110844103 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129628418856 0.236089414692 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0381325848483 0.076458572812 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0410217252171 0.0737576698707 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0816464504588 0.150856017488 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0293495557722 0.0645574589148 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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