Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Technology has made the world a better place to live Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion

Technology is the hottest trend in these modern days. It is fascinating all people, kids and adults. Some people believe that Technology has made the world a better place to live. Others disagree. In my opinion, this world have become a better place to live by the means of technology. The following arguments will reveal my reasoning and examples.

To begin with, let us discuss the transportation and the technological impact on it. And then let us compare it to those from the long time ago. In these days technology has an explicit impact on cars, which is the most popular transportation m...

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And the more important thing than that, is cars today can take people to any place
And the more important thing than that, is that cars today can take people to any place

technology influenced the invention of robots. Which can amazingly play a role of an employees or servants.
technology influenced the invention of robots, which can amazingly play a role of an employees or servants.

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