Early childhood is one of the most important stages of life since is in this stage that young children learn and form a base of their own self. Based on that, certain companies take advantage releasing television advertising focused on this audience, disclosing misleading information, encouraging the consumer world, as well as the reproduction of dangerous actions, and in light of this I will explore why television advertising should not be allowed directed to young children.
First, young children are not mature enough to distinguish whether what they see is true or not. It is known that c...
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 44, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...conclusion, childrens misinterpretation, unnecessary exposure to unhealthy practi...
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Line 9, column 143, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ment to reproduce dangerous actions are some of the many reasons why television advertising...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, as for, for example, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2020.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 370.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45945945946 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1042937817 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551351351351 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 627.3 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.1344086022 149% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.737696464 48.9658058833 183% => OK
Chars per sentence: 168.333333333 100.406767564 168% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.8333333333 20.6045352989 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 5.45110844103 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239908424142 0.236089414692 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0931880055951 0.076458572812 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0719922418511 0.0737576698707 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134945710103 0.150856017488 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0671652246277 0.0645574589148 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.7 11.7677419355 167% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 58.1214874552 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 10.1575268817 159% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.98 10.9000537634 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.0537634409 139% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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