Pop stars, politicians and sports athletes are hot topics for media, especially when it comes to their personal lives. celebrities are always been under the microscope and every simple daily event in their lives will be a headline topic on the biggest newspapers and magazines.
First of all, it's a finical reason; newspapers and TV gain a huge profit from selling celebrities' news. Advertisements revenues and shows viewing percentages will be increased if celebrities were interviewed or their updates were included in TV show or magazine column. which prove that famous people's personal lives are profitable items for the entertainment industry.
Also, most of the people like to know about public figures and celebrities' break ups, new relations and new babies which encourage news to focus more on their personal lives. People like to know every small details about their favorite celebrity because they consider their lives as the ideal lifestyle and by following their news, that's why newspapers and magazine are so interested in celebrities updates.
Finally, famous people are always under media attention because of their movies, musical video clips and politics, this attention will tempt news people to follow their personal lives as well. Journalists are always trying to get the best story, celebrities with their popular movies and songs are easy target for these stories.
In conclusion, as many people still following Rock stars' news the more attention they will get from media. Celebrities' news will be always the focus of newspapers and magazines headlines, even if it's silly and worthless news in it's continents but still popular.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 120, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Celebrities
... when it comes to their personal lives. celebrities are always been under the microscope an...
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Line 3, column 15, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...spapers and magazines. First of all, its a finical reason; newspapers and TV gai...
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Line 3, column 271, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Which
...included in TV show or magazine column. which prove that famous peoples personal live...
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Line 5, column 333, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
... lifestyle and by following their news, thats why newspapers and magazine are so inte...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, so, still, well, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 52.1666666667 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1401.0 1977.66487455 71% => OK
No of words: 262.0 407.700716846 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34732824427 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64108072255 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576335877863 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 618.680645161 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7105227847 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.363636364 100.406767564 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8181818182 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.81818181818 5.45110844103 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135658151602 0.236089414692 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0615617043124 0.076458572812 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512198594977 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0819770591243 0.150856017488 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304659138224 0.0645574589148 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 11.7677419355 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 58.1214874552 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 10.9000537634 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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