In modern age , media, tv, and newspapers play an important role in everyone's life but it plays a special role in celebrities' lives.
Yes, I do agree that the media don't respect the privacy of the famous person/ celebrities and why I feel this way I will explain below.
To begin with, nowadays media have so much they write anything sometimes the truth and sometimes the fake story on some celebrities s personal love story and relationship. For example, Alia Bhatt a Bollywood actress met with her friend some Bollywood actor just in the party and they spend quality time together but it doesn't mean that they are in a relationship. On next day all the social media, magazines and newspaper will show " O the famous actress Alia Bhatt is going to marry Ranbeer Kapoor next month" I think this Media should show some respect to their privacy. But unfortunately, they don't.
Furthermore, last year a public figure Priyanka Chopra and Sufi turner got married to Nick Jonas and before the marriage and after marriage, there were so many stories of them. Even some Media also wrote that this marriage is fake they are not real couple even. THis news got very famous and I am sure it will be very beneficial for the
media. Afterwords media says sorry what they wrote for Priyanka Chopra. I think this is very frustrating for the celebrity to see these kinds of news after a few days of marriage. Media should not publish such type of story.
In conclusion, I will strongly say that Media pay too much attention to the personal lives of celebrities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, even so, for example, i feel, i think, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 52.1666666667 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1301.0 1977.66487455 66% => OK
No of words: 273.0 407.700716846 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76556776557 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51378266933 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59706959707 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 618.680645161 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.3002306952 48.9658058833 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.076923077 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61538461538 5.45110844103 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1581957242 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618141346234 0.076458572812 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0714270444356 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103689167321 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0840400849649 0.0645574589148 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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