After World war II, the television has become commonplace in homes, businesses, and institutions, particularly as a medium for entertainment, advertising and news. As a matter of fact, it was a status symbol in back time in higher class people. Slowly it became popular among middle class. Since then it is an indispensable thing in household. In my opinion, Television plays an important role in human life.
And it has not destroyed communication among friends and family. For further discussion I have some points as follows.
First, there are many advantages of television. When we want to g...
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it certainly doesn't effect on communication
it certainly doesn't affect on communication
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