Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television has destroy communication among friends and famiy.

I disagreed that television has destroy friend and family. Television was a good friend for decades for two reasons.

First , We can get a knowledge from it from the scientific channels for adult and kids . My daughter wasnt go to the preschool so i was open the television for her to let her know the numbers the letters and the name of animals so it was a good friend for her for two years. I can manage whats channel i want and i can secure the channels so no damage to my daughter .

Second its the thing that can we enjoy with it . By seeing the songs channel or comedy channels . I rememberedwhen momy was sad for her dad's death . I invite her to see the comedy movie with me she kept laughing and laughing and she forget the saddnes .

Thats why i found the television is the most important thing in my living room . However it should used good to bring its benefit .

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Sentence: I disagreed that television has destroy friend and family.
Description: A verb 'to have', present tense, 3rd person singular is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to has and destroy

My daughter wasnt go to the preschool
My daughter didn't go to the preschool

Sentence: However it should used good to bring its benefit .
Description: A modal auxillary is not usually followed by a verb, past participle
Suggestion: Refer to should and used

Sentence: I rememberedwhen momy was sad for her dad's death .
Error: momy Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: rememberedwhen Suggestion: remembered when

Sentence: I invite her to see the comedy movie with me she kept laughing and laughing and she forget the saddnes .
Error: saddnes Suggestion: sadness

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

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