I certainly agree with statement that new generation become independent than older generation because of change society, increase job opportunities, and advancement in technology.
To begin with, in past parents and children were more attention gave only for education. Older people thought different from new generation. Parents were restrict to doing job without education especially girls. Since narrow thought of society, students were most depends on their parents until, he/she complete their educations. But now change the society views, young people are thing long term about their future. High school students are also doing jobs for financial support their family.
Furthermore, progression of country provides good job opportunities to students. Larger field invites younger to work with company. In addition, college and campus also give chance to students to work with them and earn money. For an instance, I m third year pharmacy student and working as lab assistance. I earn pretty money and this money helps to pay my tuition fees and some money spend on buying study material, so, I only depend on my parents for my dorm fees.
Moreover, modern world earn money is not hard work. Only need the knowledge and talents to earn money. In many ways people earn money by uses their talents or skill. For an example, my brother has good knowledge about computer. In fact, he achieves many certificates and awards in compute subject. He is only 16 years old but one computer company not only provide job but also handsome salary which is more sufficient for him. Now, youngsters touch with latest update, technology and invention. In past, people only need education but now, people need education as well as knowledge and experience.
In brief, in the contemporary society, younger students become independent for everything because availability plenty of jobs, freedom of society and up to date with world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 155, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'restricted'.
Suggestion: restricted
...erent from new generation. Parents were restrict to doing job without education especial...
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Line 4, column 449, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the latest'.
Suggestion: with the latest
...fficient for him. Now, youngsters touch with latest update, technology and invention. In pa...
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Line 4, column 495, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'In the past'?
Suggestion: In the past
...atest update, technology and invention. In past, people only need education but now, pe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, third, well, in addition, in brief, in fact, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1616.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 308.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24675324675 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66034927332 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600649350649 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.7768778849 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.9523809524 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6666666667 20.6045352989 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168153326871 0.236089414692 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.048307067784 0.076458572812 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438015240785 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0891835636403 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0631792743842 0.0645574589148 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.1575268817 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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