Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Usually, students start social and sports activities in earlier in their school days and these activities are integrated into his course as the extracurricular activity. Some students aim to be a sportsperson in their school days and they get admission in universities as sports quota students. In America students who were good footballer get admission to a good university as an exceptional sports student, sometimes with scholarships. Sports engrossed part of college life. Every University has its own sports club.
Sports activities are needed not only to build a fit physics or a good mental strength, but also sports are nowadays a path to of income or another job option. We all know that a sports person income way much than a pure academic researcher. As for the social activity, social activities are the window to the other side of the world for the students. By socialize students get rid of the boredom from their daily lives.
Social activities like hiking with friends or camping build strong relationships with other students, or by organizing a blood donation camp or some social awareness camp outside the college campus gives an opportunity to the students to socialize with the people of the city. Socializing events like going to the pub or some concert is an option for students to understand the lifestyle of the local peoples.
Sometimes, university students don't get the time to practice the sports or socialize with friends, as PhD students sometimes students work on their thesis even on Sundays and thus they don't get the time to take part in some to social events or practice sports and that could sometimes become harmful for them. Sports activities and social events are integrated part of our life without any doubt. Every student should take part in sports and social events but making that obvious for university students that would create pressure on their lives, as there is much coursework already in their shoulder and to force them to do something would be unethical.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: nowadays
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, thus, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1691.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 336.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03273809524 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69293601996 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.6981756993 48.9658058833 171% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.076923077 100.406767564 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8461538462 20.6045352989 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.38461538462 5.45110844103 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.53405017921 221% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 18.0 5.5376344086 325% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138592766093 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0622049799067 0.076458572812 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0228701950547 0.0737576698707 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0678936768427 0.150856017488 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0221771233781 0.0645574589148 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 11.7677419355 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.