Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Extra-curricular activities (ECA) is one of the important aspects required by the students, either in their school life or in the college life. Personally, I believe that it is extremely benificial to be involved in sports and social activities by the students during their learning period, and thus every universities and college should appropriates certain budget in these sectors; which is equally important to the education. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essays.
First of all, allocating of certain budget in the ECA would lead to the refreshment and made energized the students despite from the academic period.It will enables every student to make sharpen and intellectual to every student by keeping them active and alert--leading to the healthy life. Therefore, every college and universities should ear-marked the certain budget for the sports activities due to which certain students can leads a healthy life with good academics, and in some aspects, students may become the good player later while in his/her future, in the case of having innate talent. My own experience is a compelling example for this. When I was at school and my universities, I regularly separate certain time for my sports activities, along with I always participated in each and every contest during the sports tournament. I always win the medal and incentives from my activities. I allocate certain time for my study along with these sports activities. After doing these, I also got a good grades as compared to my friend who only prefers academic career. These days, I have a good job along in addition to my fit and healthy life where I feel only positive in my mind in all round development and satisfied by it. If I had not used to play sports activities during my education period, I would be able to maintain such types of life at instant.
Secondly, in enthusiastic activities by college and universities in the field of social activities is really can makes a good career for any individual--by helping tardy and weak person. These types of activities leads to the benifits to the students as well as the second person. The social activities, if allocate some budget by the college and universities, would be the greatest work in the form of humanity--compassion and love. For instances, when my friend was in college and universities, he always become involved in the social activities like blood donation program, sanitation program, etc which was organized by the college/or universities with the collabaration of certain organizations.Consequently, involving in such types of activities, now he is at the district president of the Red-cross. He has been running his career as being a social activist.
In conclusion, I am on the opinion that college and universities should encourage their students to have sports and social activities with commensurate to academic life. This is because they help us to make good and healthy life with all terms development, and because helps us to make a good future career in multi-sectors.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 76.0 52.1666666667 146% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2567.0 1977.66487455 130% => OK
No of words: 504.0 407.700716846 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09325396825 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.73813722054 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18825190965 2.67179642975 119% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.444444444444 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 827.1 618.680645161 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.8231668983 48.9658058833 185% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.105263158 100.406767564 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5263157895 20.6045352989 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.94736842105 5.45110844103 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146272753407 0.236089414692 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0528932314963 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0397038213986 0.0737576698707 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108215693053 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0193191252753 0.0645574589148 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 11.7677419355 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 58.1214874552 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 10.002688172 155% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.247311828 156% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.