It goes without saying that in this sophisticated and up-to-the-minute era in which we live in, all human beings are always striving to carry out their bests to become much more happy and pleasant in their daily life. Whereas some individuals debate that people now are not very happy in comparison to the people lived in the past due to the rapid changes of the world, on the other side of the continuum, stand others, believing that this is not a precious and conspicuous idea. As far as I am concerned, I categorically concur with this mental attitude that these rapidly and minutely variations of the world are very constructive and bring happiness and satisfaction to people. In the ensuing essay, my perspective will be substantiated by underlying reasons.
To begin with, it is no secret to anyone that nowadays, advanced technology facilitates all the tasks that people need to perform in their daily life. This phenomenon directly impacts the happiness and satisfaction of individuals in their home and working environment as well. An example can shed some light on the subject. Consider in the past time, an Iranian person wanted to post a letter to his Australian friend in Melbourne. He needed to go to the post office and paid lots of money to send the letter. This really took his time for one day at least and he might be gotten disappointed because sending a letter in that time was a difficult issue due to the lack of amenities. However, at the present time, if a person tends to send a letter to his friend abroad, he will open his Gmail account and will send an email to his friend or family. This actually brings gratification and contentment to him which has been obtained by the quick changes of the world.
Furthermore, due to the fact that the world is swiftly changing, the rate of technology development is subsequently increasing. Under such circumstance, the present people solve their problems easily without suffering any harness. This issue dramatically increases the rate of happiness and gratification in the present people in comparison to the people lived in the past. An example can drive this notion home. Several years ago, my grandfather forced to walk around two hours to take my grandmother to a hospital in Tehran in order to generally check her body's condition because there was not any hospital around his house. Nowadays, due to the increasing the rate of technology, we can call an adept doctor to come to our house and readily check the general condition of our body. Therefore, if my grandfather had this facility at that time, he would not have compelled to walk a long time to get to the hospital.
To wrap it up, taking into account the aforementioned reasons and examples, I am of opinion that people live at the present time are greatly happy and satisfied because they can exert the advanced technology which helps them easily and rapidly solve their critical problems and do their daily tasks.
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- TPO-33 - Integrated Writing Task 80
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 341, Rule ID: PAST_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
...e light on the subject. Consider in the past time, an Iranian person wanted to post a let...
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Line 3, column 811, Rule ID: SEND_AN_EMAIL[1]
Message: Consider using 'email'.
Suggestion: email
...he will open his Gmail account and will send an email to his friend or family. This actually ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, furthermore, however, if, really, so, therefore, well, whereas, at least, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 83.0 52.1666666667 159% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2452.0 1977.66487455 124% => OK
No of words: 507.0 407.700716846 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83629191321 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74517233601 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79164688481 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 257.0 212.727598566 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506903353057 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 774.9 618.680645161 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.6782117601 48.9658058833 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.6 100.406767564 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.35 20.6045352989 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170748186546 0.236089414692 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0513040773332 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054066541575 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117626855215 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0396906326068 0.0645574589148 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 11.7677419355 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 10.002688172 185% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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