I strongly believe that, in compared with the past, today young people are better able to make decisions, since they have a lot of knowledge, self confidence and independence.
Today, as the technology progresses, the accessibility to a wide range of information becomes to an inseparable part of daily life. Young people have this chance to learn new things by searching in the internet. Besides, from past to present, the educational system advances a lot which has familiarized the children with the new world. Thus, there is no need that they ask so many questions from their parent and can make their own decisions based on their knowledge.
In addition, today's children have more self-confidence which helps them to take risk and make decisions on their own. Although is may cause failure in works, they will at least learn how to face with problems. Obtaining experiences by themselves will help children to understand things deeper, which make them independent from their parents.
Moreover, as the modern life becomes more complex, the people's lifestyle changes and parents have to work outside. I believe that, today's children are more independence rather than the past. For example, they will learn how to cook, how to care of themselves and how to make critical decisions. Thus, it is not surprising that they are not depending on their parents anymore and when they are eighteen years old, they will move to a another country and live from their parents separately.
In conclusion, I believe that today, the children are able to make decisions by themselves, because they have enough knowledge to find out what is good and what is not. Also, they have more self-confidence and experience to lives separately from their parent. Besides, the basic changes in societies help the youth to become more independent from their families.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 56, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
...e modern life becomes more complex, the peoples lifestyle changes and parents have to w...
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Line 4, column 332, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...s. Thus, it is not surprising that they are not depending on their parents anymore and when they ...
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Line 4, column 431, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...e eighteen years old, they will move to a another country and live from their par...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, may, moreover, so, thus, at least, for example, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1543.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 304.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07565789474 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77575254638 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536184210526 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.7674399385 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.866666667 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2666666667 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 5.45110844103 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281045999616 0.236089414692 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.098270259236 0.076458572812 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0681893204041 0.0737576698707 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18006286174 0.150856017488 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403996631693 0.0645574589148 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.