Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better for children to choose jobs that are similar to their parents’ jobs than to choose jobs that are very different from their parents’ jobs.
Through out the history sometimes oarents insisted on their children to keep their job. Working is the part of our life that we spend most of our time. As some people my hold the view that the childrens should continue what their parents do, However, others may have a completely different point of view. I personaly, disagree with coercing childrens to have their parents job. In othereword as long as I am concerned people are free to choose and decide for their own life. Among myriad reasons, I delve into the most conspicouos ones, which persuade me to put forward this perspective.
Firs and foremost, I believe that different people have different abilities which is true about the comparison between parent and child too. People should put their effort in what they can do in order to achieve the merit they are looking forward to obtain. For examle, I have afriend whose name is Billy. We used to go to the same school and he was one of the most hardworking people that I have ever seen. His parent were both doctors and they were continuing what their parents did. when we wanted to go to the university, his mome and dad made him to follow medical studies as his higher education majority whle he wanted to work as an engineering But he agreed to meet his parents demand. He kept on studing untill he could not pass cources since he had not the ingrediant to do so and he could not understand his cources. This amount of pressur made him to change his firld of study. He became so properous when he changed to mechanical engineering that no one could belive.
The second significant one should take into account this signifact that It is possible that the children do not like their parents job. If a person do something only because of compel, he will not ever enjoy own's life. For example, my father works as a mechanic only because his father had a store for cars. Every night he comes to home is like he hate every one only because he can not enjoy his life through out the day and as a result he never is in the mood. One of his wishes is changing his linbe work only to be able to enjoy his life more.
Finally and the last reason for me to think so is that continuing their parent job might cause a conflict between parents and childrens. An instance of it is a company which was in iran and used to produce icecream. This company was one of the biggest in its kind and ran by a family. After the father, the son started to control the company and making decisions but since the father had different approach than the son, it caused some problems between them.
To wrap it up, all aforementioned reasons and examples lead us to the conclusion that children should be free to decide whether to continue their parents way or not. Actually there are some other reasoms and exampls advocated the claim which is not mentioned above.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: THROUGH_OUT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'throughout'?
Suggestion: Throughout
Through out the history sometimes oarents insisted ...
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Line 5, column 248, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to obtaining'.
Suggestion: to obtaining
...ieve the merit they are looking forward to obtain. For examle, I have afriend whose name ...
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Line 5, column 487, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: When
...were continuing what their parents did. when we wanted to go to the university, his ...
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Line 9, column 341, Rule ID: HE_THE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'like the hate'?
Suggestion: like the hate
...r cars. Every night he comes to home is like he hate every one only because he can not enjoy...
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Line 9, column 349, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'hates'.
Suggestion: hates
...Every night he comes to home is like he hate every one only because he can not enjoy...
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Line 9, column 403, Rule ID: THROUGH_OUT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'throughout'?
Suggestion: throughout
... only because he can not enjoy his life through out the day and as a result he never is in ...
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Line 9, column 442, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[5]
Message: The adverb 'never' is usually put after the verb 'is'.
Suggestion: is never
... through out the day and as a result he never is in the mood. One of his wishes is chang...
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Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...to be able to enjoy his life more. Finally and the last reason for me to think so ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, finally, however, if, look, may, second, so, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 75.0 43.0788530466 174% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2347.0 1977.66487455 119% => OK
No of words: 519.0 407.700716846 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52215799615 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7730044521 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35625226587 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 256.0 212.727598566 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.493256262042 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 738.0 618.680645161 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2082891852 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.2692307692 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9615384615 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.23076923077 5.45110844103 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232501464155 0.236089414692 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0718838472298 0.076458572812 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0940735992774 0.0737576698707 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137317008632 0.150856017488 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0821902210217 0.0645574589148 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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