Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Parents today are more involved in their children's education than were parents in the past.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Without the shadow of doubt, parents has played an important role in children's education. As far as I am concerned parents pay more attention to their children's education. Among myriad reasons which can support my idea, I delve into the most conspicuous ones, which persuade me to put forward this perspective.
First and foremost, the decrease in the number of children in a family has caused parents to put more time for them. In the past parents should have dealt with more children but now a days we can see that each family is consist of less than three children. For instance in my family I have only a sibling while my father has seven. As he once told his father never knew where my father even study while now my father always asks me how are my grades and is completely involved in my education process.
Second, trend of life has changed from past. In older times, children were a source of income for the family since the used to find a job in early ages in order to provide for their family instead of going to school. So education was not a primary interest for parents. For example, I am 27 years old and I am still studying in university but my mom started to work when she was eighteen. Working could occupy parents and children at the same time and as a consequence there were no time for education anymore.
Last but not the least reason is finding job depends heavily on how educated one is. Parents wants to see their children prosper so they are concerned for their children future opportunity while in the past finding a work was not a major issue and so parents were not worried if their children could find a suitable job or not. An example can illustrate my point, in the past children could follow their parents steps or find another job as a result of industrialization of the countries so abundant job meant higher opportunity to find a job but base on today's life finding a job can be really competitive. A friend of whose name was Billy could not find a job even though he was well educated but his father with no writing skill found a job when he was a youth easily.
To wrap it up, all aforementioned reasons and examples lead us to the conclusion that based upon today's lifestyle finding job, change in life trends, and the decrease in the number of children in a family caused parent to put more time for their children education. Actually there are some other reasons and examples advocated the claim which is not mentioned above.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 91, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... important role in childrens education. As far as I am concerned parents pay more ...
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Line 5, column 179, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...hould have dealt with more children but now a days we can see that each family is consist ...
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Line 5, column 183, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...d have dealt with more children but now a days we can see that each family is consist ...
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Line 5, column 221, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'consisted'.
Suggestion: consisted
...w a days we can see that each family is consist of less than three children. For instan...
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Line 13, column 556, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'todays'' or 'today's'?
Suggestion: todays'; today's
...r opportunity to find a job but base on todays life finding a job can be really compet...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, if, really, second, so, still, well, while, for example, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2039.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 448.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55133928571 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60065326758 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48117815111 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491071428571 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 644.4 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.0524255921 48.9658058833 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.277777778 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8888888889 20.6045352989 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.77777777778 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261409768468 0.236089414692 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0899919227776 0.076458572812 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672380205601 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155212301424 0.150856017488 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338654040706 0.0645574589148 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.41 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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