People are living with different generation which are omit over time. There are some effects between old generation and young generation. Some people believe that young and old generation seem to be worlds apart. However, others disagree. In my opinion old people are set in their way and a bit out of touch when it comes to new things like new technology. I feel this way for two reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, today we live in a fast line and are seeking for new things in our life and developing technology make a great impression on young people which leads them doing different thing toward old one. When children are getting involved with new technology, they will learn new things which makes them distinct from their parents who had never seen that new things and never tended to make such experience which shows the gap between two generations. One of my own experience is a good case in point. I remember when I was child, my parent didn’t know anything about mobile which is kind of cellphone that you can carry it everywhere you want and connected you to everyone in every places. When I was at school, they had always worried about me since they didn’t know where I am. Once I had bought a mobile phone for them and told them we can find each other with this phone in an essential situation every moment, but they had never learnt how to use it and were set in their way. This happen made me upset and had negative point which leads to make a long distance between my parent and me. If our parent had been involving new technology, we wouldn’t have had such generation gap. This example clearly illustrate how technology lead to make generation gap between youth and old people.
Second, developing technology have changed the vision of people during the time. Their life styles are inspired by expansion of technology. By comparison in the past, the new generation are using Internet and have more comfortable life than old generation. However, old ages never tend to live with Internet like new generation. Also, they have always thought that young descents are not in touch with serious problem in the country. For example, I remember once I was doing my bank affair without Internet I went to the actual bank and waited for a long time to do my work. I was waiting for a long time to transfer my money into another account. However, by developing technology and the Internet we could do our bank affair without going directly to the bank. After that I have noticed that life would be more comfortable if we used the technology, this circumstances have been created comfortable situation that had not been in the past but when I shared my experience to my grandparent they had never believed me and maybe they were behind the times.
In conclusion, I strongly agree that old age have been set in their ways and are out of touch into young descent. For two reasons. They are not only using technology to create new vision in their life, but they also are interested into different thing
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 55, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'omitted'.
Suggestion: omitted
...ing with different generation which are omit over time. There are some effects betwe...
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Line 2, column 1126, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...een my parent and me. If our parent had been involving new technology, we wouldn't have h...
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Line 2, column 1309, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ation gap between youth and old people. Second, developing technology have chang...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, so, for example, i feel, in conclusion, kind of, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 22.0 11.0286738351 199% => OK
Pronoun: 73.0 43.0788530466 169% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2518.0 1977.66487455 127% => OK
No of words: 541.0 407.700716846 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65434380776 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82280071112 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49239638285 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.441774491682 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 794.7 618.680645161 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.956582495 48.9658058833 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2592592593 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.037037037 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 5.45110844103 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136703732366 0.236089414692 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0360421416287 0.076458572812 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0320878289689 0.0737576698707 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0752230443566 0.150856017488 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356782776124 0.0645574589148 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.96 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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