Children games have changed a lot in the recent few decades, and some people say children should not play them because it is a waste of time. Personally, while there is some advantage to playing video games, I think the disadvantage is more. I feel this way for three reasons, which I will in the following essay.
Isolation is one of the drawbacks for playing video games. Playing games seems to be fun at first, but with time it will be addicted. Therefore, the player will not get attention to the time and then waste it. A good compelling example is my friends. We have a rented place where we gather every weekend. Every Friday I go I see some of them playing Xbox, PlayStation, and BC games. Sometimes I go and set with people who do not play and return and other day and I see them sitting at the same place and nothing change. However, before we rented this place we used to talk more, have fun, play soccer. Unfortunately, video games waste their time and isolate them in this rented room so children should not be allowed to play to avoid this issue.
In addition to isolation, playing video games increase the violation. Someone who does not expose to life and suddenly sees the virtual life will think that the life in games is real. As a result, children will behave or mimic the behavior of the characters in the games. Every couple of days we hear that someone gets killed because of the bad behaviors that teenagers have learned from video games. Children learn how to steal, how to make drug deals, and how to carry guns from video games. All of these things rise children curiosity to use them in real. Once they are teenagers and exposed to life, they will use them. Guess what, they will end up in prison. So, children should not be allowed to play video games.
Frankly speaking, there is some advantage in playing video games such as learning a foreign language, built some skills, and learn from games. But, I think parents should lead their children for the rights to use the new technology in a good way. Because parents prevent children from playing these games, they will feel not complete. So, it is a good idea to monitor the children while playing.
To conclude, I agree that video games should be not allowed. That is because not only isolate the kids, but also make them violence. However, if parents take care of their children while playing and learn them the right things, this will not be a problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, frankly, however, if, so, then, therefore, while, i feel, i think, in addition, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2010.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 440.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56818181818 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57997565096 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26919725858 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.452272727273 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 614.7 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.9281590207 48.9658058833 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.7857142857 100.406767564 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7142857143 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.21428571429 5.45110844103 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.85842293907 285% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290558058878 0.236089414692 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0892594302036 0.076458572812 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0794486629812 0.0737576698707 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187747581915 0.150856017488 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0606595483545 0.0645574589148 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 11.7677419355 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.93 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.64 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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