Professors are considered one of the most important aspects in our lives. Nowadays, a lot of professor hired in many universities to improve the educational level in different counties. Moreover, professor can help students to get ready to their practical life. I am sure many people would agree that professor were highly appreciated from the society in the past than recently, while others would disagree. However, when it comes to me I totally disagree that the professor were more appreciated in the past. I feel this way fro two reasons, which I will demonstrate in the following essay.
To begin with, Nowadays, professors can get ownership from the university to study abroad. Recently, many countries try to improve their education style and they try to benefit from other societies. For instance, last year, the medical school in my home country choose three professor to get ownership to Italy to study there for three months. In fact, the professor learned how to make open hear surgery with a new technology. Moreover, when they came back to the university, they would able to teach their colleagues the same method and they would able to improve the medical level in the whole society. Furthermore, they demonstrated a whole operative in front of students to give them chance to learn new way of the open heart science. On the other hand, professors could not have this chance in the past. Moreover, they were always sticky to the old manner of teaching. As you can see, all professor are more appreciated in the new decays and they have opportunity to improve their skills and benefit from others experience.
In addition, currently, colleges pay the professor more salaries than before. Many teachers can get the salaries that they always dreamed off. For example, in the last ten years my uncle was a professor in the art college at Florida. In fact, he told me that his salary was so bad and he could not even cover his expenses. Consequently, he could not enjoy his life with his family members. Nevertheless, His salary is increased by fifty percent last year. In fact, his totally satisfied and he enjoying his life. Furthermore, he would able to cover all his duties and let his son pay all his university fee. This experience taught me that the new societies can appreciate the teachers and treat them more efficient than in the last decays.
In sum, I totally agree that professor highly appreciated nowadays than they were in the past. This is because they have chance to study abroad in different countries, and because the colleges pay them higher salaries than there were in the last couple of years.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun professor seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of professors'.
Suggestion: a lot of professors
...portant aspects in our lives. Nowadays, a lot of professor hired in many universities to improve t...
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Line 1, column 196, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l level in different counties. Moreover, professor can help students to get ready...
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Message: Did you mean 'for'?
Suggestion: for
...ppreciated in the past. I feel this way fro two reasons, which I will demonstrate i...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'professor' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'professors'.
Suggestion: professors
... school in my home country choose three professor to get ownership to Italy to study ther...
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'enjoys'.
Suggestion: enjoys
.... In fact, his totally satisfied and he enjoying his life. Furthermore, he would able to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, while, for example, for instance, i feel, in addition, in fact, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2189.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 448.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88616071429 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60065326758 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62208197719 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.466517857143 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 685.8 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.1298425699 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.1923076923 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2307692308 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.30769230769 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181932202888 0.236089414692 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0566760017843 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621915099718 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129241507474 0.150856017488 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416231017652 0.0645574589148 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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