Since the beginning of civilization until modern times, helping people in need played crucial roled in each society. Some people adheres that everybody should help each others because they can be in need sometimes. Some others takes radically different standpoint and say that individual should take their own responsibility. I am with second idea and the lines below will shed on light my viewpoint.
First of all, the foremost reason which coming to my mind is that life is hard enough. Helping people who have struggle with make decend living may make us happy but the governments should help charity organization because people pay tax. In our modern life people is not good salary due to heavy tax rate. Governments should arrange the charity organization and they should help not people.
Secondly, in addition to the importance of exessive tax rate. The Money can buy happinnes if you know how to use it and it has no means help others, if you are not wealth. Of couse, some people can see it the source of happiness but I am not that kind of person. I do not take any help so I do not want to help.
Lastly, other issue is trustablity. I do not believe the charity organization since it can not be understand that what they did with our Money. According to a reasearch study conducted at MIT, by the reputable team of scientist at MIT, it was found that people who help person which they see, is happier then people who help charity organization.
In conlusion, there are numerous reason which can be persuasive enough to corroborate my view. Having analyzed the reason, one can conlude if you do not have decend life conditions, helping people make no sense.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 228, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'take'.
Suggestion: take
...y can be in need sometimes. Some others takes radically different standpoint and say ...
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Line 3, column 112, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'struggled'.
Suggestion: struggled
...is hard enough. Helping people who have struggle with make decend living may make us hap...
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Line 7, column 193, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g to a reasearch study conducted at MIT, by the reputable team of scientist at MI...
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Line 7, column 306, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
... help person which they see, is happier then people who help charity organization. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, then, in addition, kind of, you know, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1390.0 1977.66487455 70% => OK
No of words: 292.0 407.700716846 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7602739726 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59311486418 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551369863014 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.0440465904 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.7647058824 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1764705882 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94117647059 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215783076661 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0702689924421 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617410638351 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127673816977 0.150856017488 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0292756895652 0.0645574589148 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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