Do you agree or disagree? It is better for children to choose jobs that are similar to their parents’ jobs than to choose jobs that are very different from their parents’ jobs.
In the modern society, career is crucial issue for young people. Job seekers tend to find situation with fewer risks. Father and mother have worth experience than children can use. Whether children would rather continue parents' work or start new career depends on their personality. According what I generally believe, choosing keep on caregivers' job is the best selection. The following paragraphs by containing the main reasons, will substantiate my viewpoint.
The main reasons why I believe that it is very beneficial, while we do job similar to our parents. To elaborate on my point, since parents do the jobs for long time, guardians not only have valuable experience but also have extensive broad horizon. A significant example that strikes on my mind is about my brother. When my brother wanted to choose to major for university, my father said that select civil engineering which related my fathers' work. After several years, my brother use fathers' experiment; therefore, he can earn remarkable success. Also, my father learns special and favorable tips and tricks to the son and it causes my brother is become prominence person in the civil engineering.
Besides, another influential drive behind this opt from duty as the same as caregivers is percent of fail is reduced. To elucidate my claim, if offspring accurate use parents' advice, they would decline possibility of fail in the career. A quite clear example would be company of my uncle. At first, when he was working as worker behind her father, he decided start her own jobs. Hence, my grandfather helped him to achieved her goal and avoided to failed her son. And after many years, my uncle become far known person to the work. Nonetheless, unless my uncle had chosen to job which not related patents' work, he would fail or he not success as he is.
To conclude, I generally hold the opinion that parents are the best adviser for doing or selecting career, therefore it is beneficial for children if elect jobs as the same as their father and mother. Due to guardians have worthwhile knowledge; thus, they can aid children and reduce possibility of frailer.
- Some people think that success is most important in their life. Others think that it’s more important to be happy when they fail. Which idea do you agree with and why? 66
- TPO 44 70
- TPO 42 70
- TPO 20 80
- Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long 76
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, hence, if, nonetheless, so, therefore, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1781.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 357.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98879551821 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64156203098 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59943977591 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.0941701061 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.8095238095 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 5.45110844103 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195138538614 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0584007142681 0.076458572812 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675856068069 0.0737576698707 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14335999817 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0668635597309 0.0645574589148 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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