Spending some time on relaxation has always played an important role in human beings’ lives. In this regard, some people believe that doing physical exercise is a more beneficial way of relaxation; however I have enough reasons to object to this point of view, and I will illustrate two of which in the following paragraphs.
First and foremost, there are a number of movie genres which people can select according to their interest, also they can relieve their body from anxieties by watching them, especially hilarious ones without consuming much energy; whereas they have to consume a lot of energy, if they want to do physical exercises. To put it in a more vivid picture, nowadays, people have to work really hard to make ends meet. So, they are sick to death of doing their routinely works, and they cannot put energy on doing exercises. As a result, watching films, which does not need a considerable amount of energy, can be a better choice. In addition, as people have different interests, they can opt for distinctive genres of movies they like in order to be free from their work stresses. Take workers who go to their workplaces from dawn till dusk, for instance. Returning to their home, workers do not have enough energy to do physical exercises. Given that they consumed their energy during the day.
Secondly, people can kill two birds with one stone when they decide to relax by reading books; for one thing, they can forget their life’s difficulties; for another, they can learn a bunch of new things with which they build a better future. To clarify this point, books have always been the best materials to which people can allocate their time. Consequently, should people study a lot of books, they will have a great deal of information in different fields; furthermore, since facing distinctive bad situations, people can use that knowledge in order to overcome those conditions. As a way of illustration, take people who have fantastic social knowledge because they read different kinds of books and individuals who do not have any knowledge in that field. It is more likely for the former to find a well-paid job since every profession needs an excellent social knowledge these days. So, they can be hired in better occupations and can make a huge profit with which they will have a more comfortable life.
To sum up, all things considered, I firmly believe that watching a film or studying a book is a more beneficial method for relaxing than is doing physical exercise. It is due to the fact that, not only can people choose their favorite movie genre which can calm them down, but also they can learn several new subjects with which they can make a better future.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, for instance, in addition, as a result, for one thing, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 9.8082437276 214% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2233.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 464.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8125 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64119157421 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56062690743 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512931034483 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 693.0 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.0404470824 48.9658058833 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.055555556 100.406767564 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7777777778 20.6045352989 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.27777777778 5.45110844103 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151267731911 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0595261081351 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577700847267 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114263625687 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276960047993 0.0645574589148 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 11.7677419355 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.002688172 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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