Do you agree or disagree that progress is always good? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Some people argue that a development was always for better since the progression in technology and medicine has been providing people with an extra free time and advanced medications. However, other people are convinced that progress is not always so positive. Personally, I think that any development has some negative consequences. There are a few reasons why I hold this stance.
To start with, the technological development has caused an environmental deterioration. In nineteen century, the industrial revolution took place. At that time, owners of large factories preferred to use machines rather than a hand labor to produce goods. Nowadays, all factories are operated by machinery. The machinery requires a huge amount of energy to run. The energy mostly produced by burning charcoal, gas or oil. In turn, the burning results in an emission of a tremendous amount of carbon dioxide in the atmosphere, which causes a global warming. The consequences of the global warming are terrible – numerous species of animals have been disappearing. For instance, according to National Geographic magazine, the increase in global temperature has resulted in a population of fish in the Polar Region to decline. The fish is a food source for polar bears. If the bears have nothing to eat, they will eventually die out. To that end, the perspectives of the further technological progression could be quiet tragic.
Secondly, genetically modified products put humans` health in danger. The discovery of genes and their structure was one of the most prominent scientific breakthroughs in the history of the human race. By changing amino acids` sequences in a gene, scientists were able to create a variety of new foods for the mass consuming. The genetically modified food is tasty, inexpensive and has a long shelf life. However, the recent studies have revealed that this food causes a number of life-threatening ailments such as cancer. If people can find out that they have cancer at the very beginning of the disease, they will have a chance to cure. Otherwise, the consequences can be lethal. Despite the fact that these days, numerous modern drugs and techniques are available for people to treat this horrible illness, not everyone can afford them since they are extremely costly. Therefore, the development of genetic engineering has been threatening people`s well-being for the last decade.
To conclude, I think that any advancement has its benefits and drawbacks. This is because by improving one aspect of life on the planet the evolution disturbs the others by jeopardizing our health and nature.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1025, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ical progression could be quiet tragic. Secondly, genetically modified products ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for instance, i think, such as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2209.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 418.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28468899522 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04691253057 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590909090909 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 702.9 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 14.0 3.08781362007 453% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.9768913431 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.8148148148 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4814814815 20.6045352989 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.59259259259 5.45110844103 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0439521700666 0.236089414692 19% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0114043810268 0.076458572812 15% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0259828022808 0.0737576698707 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0306006469699 0.150856017488 20% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404820887468 0.0645574589148 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 58.1214874552 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 126.0 86.8835125448 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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