There is no doubt that working is most important activity in our lives. The majority of adult working daily either from home or fome office to support not only themselves but also their families. However, If I have the privilege to work from home or from the office, I would prefer to work form the office. The basis for my views is because working from home is more convenient, save time and money, and less distracting.
Working from home is very convenient. People who work from home using their computer enjoy schedual flixability. For example, A friend of mine works for Google as a web designer. His job task is to design web site for customers. Given that he has to work from his computer, he can enjoy working at any time. Thus, he has the ability to manage his own time. For instance, he can drop his kides at school early morning, eat brekfast and then start to work. Yet, this is not the only privilege that he enjoys. He also has the flixability to choose his work place. For example, He can work either form Starbucks or from local library. In contrast, If he have to attend an office at the dpecific time everyday, he could looses the flixability to manage his schedual.
In addition to the flixability, working from home save time and money. Provide that public transpoortation is money and time consuming, People can spend one thired of their time and salary on commuting and purchase tickets. If people have to goto the office everyday, they would wake up early everymoring, prepare breakefast and geting ready then they have to wait for bus, buy ticket and wait for the bus to deliver them to their job distination. IF the employees missed up with any of the previous process, they may wait more time waiting for the folowing bus. For example, I live in a city far from downtown New York with poor public transportation servece. Because the city located out of downtown, Bus tickets are expensive and bus scedual evey hour. If I miss the bus, I have to wait outside the street for another hour waiting for another bus. working form home, could safe tremendous amount of money and time.
Finally, working at home is less distracting and less stressful. A study done at the University Of California indicated that employess tend to preform better when they feel that no one monitor and judge their actions. People who worke from home feel are more relaxed and less stressed. Which, in fact, a signifact factor for their performance. A vived example is my brother. Given that my brother was incrediby shy person, he have anxiety to deal with people in public. Because he affried to be critisized by his peers or bosses, his preformance was under the average in his computer company. However, when He started to work on deveoping his computer software from his home, he was able to achieve excellance. Working indibindantly from home releave the anxiety and the stress that he previousely experience at the office. As a result, he is one of the most successful Computer sofetware programe developer.
As a conclusion, we can safely say that working from home carries significant benefits. Spending less money, saving time and flixibility are the most imortnat benefits that working from home can offer. Therefore I agree that working from home is far better than working from office.
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Essay evaluation report
working is most important activity in our lives.
working is the most important activity in our lives.
The majority of adult working daily
The majority of adult work daily
working from home is more convenient, save time and money, and less distracting.
Description: convenient, save time and money, and less distracting are not parallel
If he have to attend
If he has to attend
he could looses the flixability to manage his schedual.
he could lose the flixability to manage his schedual.
working from home save time and money.
working from home saves time and money.
People who worke from home feel are more relaxed and less stressed
People who work from home are more relaxed and less stressed
was incrediby shy person, he have anxiety...
was an incrediby shy person, he has anxiety...
Sentence: The majority of adult working daily either from home or fome office to support not only themselves but also their families.
Error: fome Suggestion: fore
Sentence: People who work from home using their computer enjoy schedual flixability.
Error: schedual Suggestion: schedule
Error: flixability Suggestion: flexibility
Sentence: For instance, he can drop his kides at school early morning, eat brekfast and then start to work.
Error: kides Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: brekfast Suggestion: breakfast
Sentence: He also has the flixability to choose his work place.
Error: flixability Suggestion: flexibility
Sentence: In contrast, If he have to attend an office at the dpecific time everyday, he could looses the flixability to manage his schedual.
Error: dpecific Suggestion: specific
Error: schedual Suggestion: schedule
Error: flixability Suggestion: flexibility
Sentence: In addition to the flixability, working from home save time and money.
Error: flixability Suggestion: flexibility
Sentence: Provide that public transpoortation is money and time consuming, People can spend one thired of their time and salary on commuting and purchase tickets.
Error: transpoortation Suggestion: transportation
Error: thired Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: If people have to goto the office everyday, they would wake up early everymoring, prepare breakefast and geting ready then they have to wait for bus, buy ticket and wait for the bus to deliver them to their job distination.
Error: breakefast Suggestion: breakfast
Error: everymoring Suggestion: everything
Error: distination Suggestion: distinction
Error: goto Suggestion: go to
Error: geting Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: IF the employees missed up with any of the previous process, they may wait more time waiting for the folowing bus.
Error: folowing Suggestion: following
Sentence: For example, I live in a city far from downtown New York with poor public transportation servece.
Error: servece Suggestion: service
Sentence: Because the city located out of downtown, Bus tickets are expensive and bus scedual evey hour.
Error: evey Suggestion: ever
Error: scedual Suggestion: schedule
Sentence: A study done at the University Of California indicated that employess tend to preform better when they feel that no one monitor and judge their actions.
Error: preform Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: employess Suggestion: employers
Sentence: People who worke from home feel are more relaxed and less stressed.
Error: worke Suggestion: work
Sentence: Which, in fact, a signifact factor for their performance.
Error: signifact Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: A vived example is my brother.
Error: vived Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Given that my brother was incrediby shy person, he have anxiety to deal with people in public.
Error: incrediby Suggestion: incredibly
Sentence: Because he affried to be critisized by his peers or bosses, his preformance was under the average in his computer company.
Error: preformance Suggestion: performance
Error: critisized Suggestion: criticized
Error: affried Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: However, when He started to work on deveoping his computer software from his home, he was able to achieve excellance.
Error: excellance Suggestion: excellence
Error: deveoping Suggestion: developing
Sentence: Working indibindantly from home releave the anxiety and the stress that he previousely experience at the office.
Error: indibindantly Suggestion: indignantly
Error: releave Suggestion: release
Error: previousely Suggestion: previously
Sentence: As a result, he is one of the most successful Computer sofetware programe developer.
Error: sofetware Suggestion: software
Error: programe Suggestion: program
Sentence: Spending less money, saving time and flixibility are the most imortnat benefits that working from home can offer.
Error: imortnat Suggestion: important
Error: flixibility Suggestion: flexibility
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 8 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 35 2
Double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 20 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 8 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 35 2
No. of Sentences: 35 15
No. of Words: 573 350
No. of Characters: 2652 1500
No. of Different Words: 259 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.893 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.628 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.442 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 176 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 132 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 76 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 46 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.371 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.9 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.543 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.3 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.456 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.206 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 206, Rule ID: WEB_SITE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'website'?
Suggestion: website
...web designer. His job task is to design web site for customers. Given that he has to wo...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 540, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e enjoys. He also has the flixability to choose his work place. For example, He c...
^^
Line 3, column 655, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...from local library. In contrast, If he have to attend an office at the dpecific tim...
^^^^
Line 3, column 701, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...o attend an office at the dpecific time everyday, he could looses the flixability to man...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 720, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'loose'
Suggestion: loose
...at the dpecific time everyday, he could looses the flixability to manage his schedual....
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 260, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...kets. If people have to goto the office everyday, they would wake up early everymoring, ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 337, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...erymoring, prepare breakefast and geting ready then they have to wait for bus, bu...
^^
Line 5, column 627, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n a city far from downtown New York with poor public transportation servece. Bec...
^^
Line 5, column 707, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ecause the city located out of downtown, Bus tickets are expensive and bus scedua...
^^
Line 5, column 857, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Working
...r another hour waiting for another bus. working form home, could safe tremendous amount...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 386, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... vived example is my brother. Given that my brother was incrediby shy person, he ...
^^
Line 7, column 428, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...my brother was incrediby shy person, he have anxiety to deal with people in public. ...
^^^^
Line 9, column 109, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...gnificant benefits. Spending less money, saving time and flixibility are the most...
^^
Line 9, column 204, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...efits that working from home can offer. Therefore I agree that working from home is far b...
^^^^^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'thus', 'as to', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'in contrast', 'in fact', 'no doubt', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.246105919003 0.229887763892 107% => OK
Verbs: 0.168224299065 0.158761421928 106% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0669781931464 0.0866891130778 77% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0436137071651 0.046263068375 94% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0763239875389 0.0685040099705 111% => OK
Prepositions: 0.127725856698 0.118717715034 108% => OK
Participles: 0.0451713395639 0.0351676179071 128% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.56633171983 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0327102803738 0.0309702414327 106% => OK
Particles: 0.00311526479751 0.00188951952338 165% => OK
Determiners: 0.0638629283489 0.0887237588012 72% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0171339563863 0.0209618222197 82% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00623052959502 0.0139019557991 45% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3317.0 2387.08602151 139% => OK
No of words: 573.0 408.028673835 140% => OK
Chars per words: 5.78883071553 5.86048508987 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.89258810929 4.48200974243 109% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.319371727749 0.338922669872 94% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.246073298429 0.251872472559 98% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.157068062827 0.174417080927 90% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0994764397906 0.112833075102 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56633171983 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 267.0 212.727598566 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.465968586387 0.524397521467 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 55.9333208555 59.2087087015 94% => OK
How many sentences: 36.0 20.6684587814 174% => OK
Sentence length: 15.9166666667 20.5533526081 77% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5551446394 48.84282405 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.1388888889 120.699889404 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9166666667 20.5533526081 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.644075263715 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.54480286738 252% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 40.5239965096 45.7405998639 89% => OK
Elegance: 1.45405405405 1.45489161554 100% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248776603517 0.300154397459 83% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.134854793214 0.103427244359 130% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0998392048895 0.0752933317313 133% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.42844761209 0.497263757937 86% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.153528097537 0.151897553556 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0899835335875 0.114077575197 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0797462158562 0.0781384742642 102% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.314755772419 0.336927656856 93% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0415802603496 0.067059652881 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189896283016 0.210909579961 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0598304701565 0.0618886996521 97% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8870967742 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.86379928315 233% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.91756272401 203% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 15.0 8.42114695341 178% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 2.4623655914 244% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 2.75985663082 217% => OK
Total topic words: 27.0 13.6433691756 198% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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