Do you agree or disagree?
Parents are the best teachers.
Even though many scholars and some of the people argue as if it is a general truth that schoolteachers and professors are the best teachers and instructors in people’s life, I firmly recommend that parents have been perfect and great persons in everybody’s life. Parents are older than their children and they have more useful experiences and skills. In addition, parents used to stay with children until they grow up and be proficient. And believe it or not, nobody can replace the role of parents in human life. I will elaborate my idea with significant reasons in the following paragraphs.
One of the meaningful reasons coming to my mind at first is that parents passed more ways and taste several dangerous methods to be the success in their life, therefore we can use and utilize their experiences in our ways very well. An example can illuminate this claim, when I was selecting my major in university, actually, I did not have enough information and knowledge about universities and also about the rank of fields. I used to think which field is the best and has a better future job or job market, something like this. At that time, my father talked to me and gave me more important advice and guidance that his opinion was very valuable for me. As you can see parents have many experiences that help us to take a complete decision in the sensitive conditions.
Another remarkable reason is that if you chose parents as your teacher, they will the excellent persons who always are beside you and available. As far as I am concerned, when I have problems which I cannot solve them or I don’t access to some teachers, my mother is a first person who I come near her and ask my question. Not only do they love us very much, but also they spend most of their time hang out with children. As a matter of fact, parents are only people who desire their children to be a successful and famous individuals in their future. This experience thought me that our parents are the best people in our life that in every circumstances and situations are near us. Never have they left their children even to be adult people.
As a result, based on all of the related reasons one can conclude that even though other people have a great role in person’s life, but parent are the best teacher due to they always stay and spend their time and investment for children, therefor, they can give their important experiences and share them via children.
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- integrated essay TPO 19 80
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: some
Even though many scholars and some of the people argue as if it is a general trut...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...t his opinion was very valuable for me. As you can see parents have many experienc...
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Suggestion: all the
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...xperiences and share them via children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, if, so, therefore, well, in addition, as a matter of fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 13.8261648746 195% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 67.0 43.0788530466 156% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2028.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 433.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68360277136 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56165014514 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65798491465 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5103926097 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 643.5 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.063073104 48.9658058833 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.294117647 100.406767564 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4705882353 20.6045352989 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76470588235 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151866640513 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0533737675976 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0411444527465 0.0737576698707 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0979607010597 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364750709299 0.0645574589148 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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