nowadays people are more interested in pets especially in dog and cat. they remove the lonely with the pets. while some people prefer to have cat as a pet, i prefer to have a dog as a pet for myself because dogs are so lovely and sometimes they are helpful.
dogs are lovely. if we see most cats are dangerous or we can say they are usually serious while most dogs are lovely and they are calm. dogs need lees care than cats, most of the people prefer to have a dog whenever they are alone because dogs have a kind of hormone which they show more love with the people. we have different kinds of dogs most of them are really lovely like puppies which more people love them. for more people dogs are like a friend with them, people play with their dogs and i think this is a great way to spend free time.
dogs are very helpful. dogs can help people in different and difficult situation. when i was at college my friend had a dog, my friend did not know swimming one day we went to a sea in holiday my friend fall in the sea and he was going deep to the sea, but his dog swim in the sea and helped him. in addition, most of the people keep the dogs for preventing for thieves. dogs will not let the robbers to rob something from the home or somewhere. they will detect the thief and catch them or they will bark.
in conclusion, i prefer to have dog rather than having cat because they are so lovely and helpful.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, so, while, i think, in addition, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1139.0 1977.66487455 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 276.0 407.700716846 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.1268115942 4.8611393121 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.9890578377 2.67179642975 74% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 212.727598566 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.474637681159 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 361.8 618.680645161 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.0635017569 48.9658058833 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.9333333333 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.5376344086 397% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328422500697 0.236089414692 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14112984257 0.076458572812 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12885663366 0.0737576698707 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.276349200512 0.150856017488 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128276145539 0.0645574589148 199% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 11.7677419355 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 58.1214874552 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.67 10.9000537634 61% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.67 8.01818996416 71% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 86.8835125448 23% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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