extended family is less important now than it was in the past
The family is an undeniable part of human's life through time. Nowadays, with the development of technology, some people do not have any free time to spend with their family. They believe that the importance of family decreased compare to the past. In my perspective, part of the family in our life is increasing and still is significant.
The first reason to point is that the advancement of technology causes many economic problems for families. In the present time because of the financial problem for the families, they have to devote most of their time working to provide comfortable facilities for their children. Therefore, they do not have much time to spend with their children which can bad effect on them since they need attention. They usually fill their absence with putting their children with their grandparents. By this way grandparents taking care of them and to not let them to feel alone. For example, my friend’s parent have to work in two place because of their financial problem. So, they put their friend with their grandparent and aunts to taking care of them and check his study grade. They also work with him to study and if he has a weakness in specific subjects, they aid him to understand it.
The second reason worth mentioning is that, parents need someone to guide them when they face problems since they do not have plenty of life experience. It is a plausible chance that their families had a situation like their when they were younger. Therefore, they can compensate their lack of experience with consulting with their families and find rational solutions for their problem. Moreover, families are a great environment to feel relaxation and being loved. Since many people’s mind are very busy in the present they, extended family can play a prominent and crucial role in their life. Therefore, by spending just a little time with them they can release all their tension and negative thoughts. For example, a student who study for entrance exam of university is under a lot of pressure and by hanging out with his cousins, they can make his nervous fade away.
To make a long story short, based on the aforementioned reason, Family still has vital effects on human’s lives and their role in the life of all people are significant.
- extended family is less important now than it was in the past 70
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past. 81
- TPO 3 70
- tpo 33 75
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Successful people try new things and take risks rather than only doing what they know how to do well. 90
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, second, so, still, therefore, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1901.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 388.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89948453608 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65949785575 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507731958763 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 585.9 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.5242601761 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.05 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 5.45110844103 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0644545454699 0.236089414692 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0336425305906 0.076458572812 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586512351685 0.0737576698707 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0615814531401 0.150856017488 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0522814248817 0.0645574589148 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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