As technology is getting advanced, the governments are searching for new fields in order to invest or contribute some money. From my point of view, it is very crucial to ascertain future of humankind and space or other planets have to always remain as a second plan or plan B, and if something will happen to earth they will be solution or clue for humans to find another habitat for living. I uphold this statement for 3 main reasons, which I will explore in my following essay.
First of all, I would like to elucidate claim that I made above deeper, in order to make you understand more precise and clear. According to some scientific research , it is evident that Earth is facing a lot of obstacles, which may become inevitable after a while, so we have search other dwellings or habitats for surviving, and space programs are one clue for us to stay alive. For instance, if global warming is going to be so tremendous or prevalent, we will not be able to supress it and If we don't find any other way we will end up being dead.
Secondly, space isn't not only place for living, but also it is full of substantial materials for humans such as gold, particular elements, maybe even some particles. So we can use space so as to facilitate our lives and maybe utilize it for overcoming some problems. As a matter of fact, there are dozens of materials that are declining day by day and we have to derive some of them from space.
Thirdly, we human beings were always skeptical since we born and we every time search answers for the questions that we observe over time. Consequently, making contributions to specific space programs may engender finding answers of questions that baffles our mind because a lot of them lie on space and getting closer to space makes us to have deeper view of the universe.
In conclusion, I would like to emphasize and underline very vital point that we don't have to cease to make contribution to space programs because it will be the last key for reopening doors for human if earth will be eradicated.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, while, as to, even so, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a matter of fact, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1670.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 366.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56284153005 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57182893355 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543715846995 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.1344086022 149% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.4927633321 48.9658058833 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.166666667 100.406767564 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5 20.6045352989 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.9166666667 5.45110844103 274% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0850135678069 0.236089414692 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0414520092537 0.076458572812 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0348941638586 0.0737576698707 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0546349658759 0.150856017488 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308836453827 0.0645574589148 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 11.7677419355 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.76 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.0537634409 139% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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