Employment is an important aspect of today's lifestyle and provides the facilities to have a better life. However, there has always been a conflict between job security that ensures our future and a job that provides job satisfaction. It is my opinion that job satisfaction is not always available and hence if we have the opportunity to secure job, it should be our first priority.
People always have the option to resign from their current job but finding a decent job involves weeks or even months of searching. As a result, we should carefully consider the consequences of waiting to find our desired job. Consider my uncle who didn't accept a job opportunity and forced to wait a year to find his desirable job. While he could accept the job offer and resigned his job when he can find his desired job vacancy.
Waiting for a job is not a wise option, since it may convey a misunderstanding regard individual personality. Many employers consider an employment gap a negative characteristic and hesitate to employ these people. For example, each year I have reviewed several resumes in our company, and there is a restriction on gap years for employment. This restriction imposed because the employment gap results in a reduction of competent and robustness which are essential in any job position.
From previously mentioned reasons I conclude that securing a job should be the first priority for a person. Otherwise, it may take several months until you find your desired job and meanwhile this waiting further endanger your employment opportunities.
- Do you agree or disagree with following statement? Parents today are more involved in their children's education than were parents in the past. 70
- In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives. 60
- TPO-40 - Independent Writing Task Some parent offer their school-age children money for each high grade (mark) they get in school Do you think this is a good idea?Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 76
- Do you agree or disagree with following statement? Parents today are more involved in their children's education than were parents in the past. 60
- TPO 30 66
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 250, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
... our desired job. Consider my uncle who didnt accept a job opportunity and forced to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, may, so, while, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 52.1666666667 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1306.0 1977.66487455 66% => OK
No of words: 259.0 407.700716846 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04247104247 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96894878826 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 212.727598566 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567567567568 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 618.680645161 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 17.9983562695 48.9658058833 37% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 100.461538462 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9230769231 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53846153846 5.45110844103 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343195021493 0.236089414692 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137510480018 0.076458572812 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0770859469228 0.0737576698707 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217046184734 0.150856017488 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0593079783946 0.0645574589148 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.01818996416 116% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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