If you could study a subject that you have never had the opportunity to study, what would you choose? Explain your choice, using specific reasons and details.
People can not learn lots of things at one time. We go to university to get a broad education, and we gain knowledge about some particular fields like law, engineering, literature and so on. I studied engineering in the university, but if I had an opportunity to study, it would absolutely be medicine. I feel this for a couple of reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, people benefits from the studies of this medicine. I like to help all of the living things especially human beings. With the outcomes of the medicine studies, lots of illnesses can be cured and new appearances of illnesses can be decreased. My own experience is a good example of this. I had a friend who was working on a medicine laboratory, she and her team found a very effective liquid that kills all the enemies in a person`s body who has a lung cancer. She was very proud and because of that invention, she knows that it would save more than 1.000 people in the society.
Secondly, studying medicine offers a reputable income and has lots of career opportunities. As I said above, I studied engineering and could not obtain a job for one year, after I graduated from university. However, medicine students can find a well paid job right after they graduated from university. I read an article in a newspaper which says that studying medicine is the best job offering one among all the subjects in the university.
Furthermore, people believe that the ones who study medicine are clever and they get respect from the others in the society. Studying engineering is not like that, because it is not that hard to be an engineer, anyone can do it. By studying medicine, I would get respect from the people around me and I would be assumed smart.
In conclusion, studying medicine leads highly paid jobs, and by studying medicine I would have a chance to help people from all around the world by finding beneficial cures for health diseases. That is why I would like to study medicine If I had a chance to do so.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 82, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...tudies of this medicine. I like to help all of the living things especially human beings. ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, i feel, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1674.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 360.0 407.700716846 88% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75216525308 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 212.727598566 85% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502777777778 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8627815458 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.1052631579 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9473684211 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110060206682 0.236089414692 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0397491921732 0.076458572812 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044529626457 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0709186423545 0.150856017488 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276439091094 0.0645574589148 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Try to use less pronouns (like 'It, I, They, We, You...') as the subject of a sentence.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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